Reviews for The adventures of Hiki

Reviews For: The adventures of Hiki

Ookami Bakura 2007-08-16 ch 2,	abusehaha so Mary-Sue! XD what happens next? :)
lolo popoki 2006-06-15 ch 2,	abuseYou are defintely good at trashing Mary-Sues... :D What fun!
Kishofwings 2006-04-19 ch 2,	abuseI love it! lol keep it up!
Liem 2006-04-17 ch 1,	abuseAhaha. I love this. I loved the giant pink tank. And I loved this sentence the most, "Wasn't Hiko her true love? No, it seems. He was just someone she slept with." And the magical transportation to the beautiful valley. And the strategic rain falling down as Hiki cries. And I don't even want to take a guess at who her true love is, because the list could probably go on for very long. Or, well, for as long as there are bishounen in Rurouni Kenshin. Which would be sufficiently long enough for several more chapters (hinthint). Liem
maxy-chan 2006-04-03 ch 1,	abuseXD I have no idea who Mary-sue might be, but I really like your stories featuring her XD lol Well... true love... XP Ken-chan? naah... he's too dense and thick-headed for that... XD lol Yahiko maybe? Hm... she might go under the nickname 'Tsubame'... hmm... XP lol it's just a wild guess XP good luck writing!
White Rabbit Tale 2006-04-02 ch 1,	abuseI don't know, I could place bets on Kenshin, Sano, certainly Aoshi and Soujiro, Saitou...or Hiko! Lol. That would be so like Mary-Sue authors...to forget that Hiko was the father. XD But seriously great idea of a parody. Personally, though, I think it would have been funny if the mom's name kept changing. Of course, it's rather funny as it is...so unpronouncable! Giant pink tank...wipes tears...of laughter Love it.

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