That was perfectly heart-wrenching and devastating and I loved every minute of it! I managed to hold off the tears, but it was a major effort. Excellent ending. Thanks for the great read!

~ Satori Blackthorn

Nice one. :)

Found this at PRE and just had to look it up to read the rest. Very well done!

I just read this entire story, and I am so impressed. The flashbacks and the dreams fitted into the story so well! The way you wrote them was very effective, and this last chapter... how you portrayed Jen and Wes was incredibly heart-wrenching.

As for constructive criticism, in the last chapter, in the paragraph beginning "A thousand years later..." you used "it's" instead of "its" (contractions and possessive words). Also, in that same paragraph, you used "a statue of the man who had gave up everything" when it should be "had given up everything". Just a few minor mistakes that I thought you might want to know.

Anyway, I really really really really enjoyed reading this story. I hope you'll be inspired to write more Time Force fiction (with Jen as the lead. Because she is the most interesting. Sorry. Just HAD to add that.).

So, this is what could've happened if they had gone through the memory adaptation. Excellent. After all, not every story needs to have a fairy tale ending.

Well, i could swear I reviewed this... guess not. Moving on!

Excellent ending, Sierra. I loved the opening scene and at first I thought Wes was alive and I was jumping out of my chair... but then I realized it was just a dream. But at least she got to see him, which is what I was happy for.

It's good to see that Jen and Eric finally respect each other, which makes it even better at the end.

The last line, "Because of you, We Live" is truly a nice touch to it! I loved reading it and was all "aw" over the ending.

Another wonderful conclusion to an awesome story by the infamous Bravo45, ;) Great job, Sierra. Looking forward to what journey you take us on next!

Until next time!

~Steph
White Time Ranger

It happened again . . . I totally reviewed this! >:| But how could I mind reading it again? :D


I absolutely love the beginning of this chapter—such an evil way to start it out, but really sweet and sad and touching as well. Poor Wes :( It was nice to kinda see him again, to hear what he would have told her if he could have. *runs off to cry*

I’m back.

“You loved him . . . too” *bursts into tears* I can’t believe he admitted it, and I’m glad he and Jen came to an understanding and he could let go some :( And I LOVE the scene flashing in the background of it all, it gave it such a tone. And then to finally know how it all happened . . . very intense. I’m so glad you didn’t show us before, it’s a perfect ending.

(And I must say, I think it’s adorable that for even a brief moment Wes wondered how he looked : ) ) lol)

I could have cried (again) reading those two final scenes, it’s so heartbreaking! I’m so glad that Wes had a little peace at the end, though, as much as he could :( And the last one was such a fitting end to this, coming full circle-ish and showing what Wes really did for them, not just saving them at the time but letting them have the rest of their lives. *sighs* Noble Wes . . . you must write a story where he is alive and happy now.

Really.

Well, either way, I can’t wait for the next one :D

Loves,

--Myriah


PS: Half hour= IMPALA!

A sequel please

Damn it, now I'm blubbering all over my keyboard and it's all your fault. Heartbreaking, yet uplifting in the end. I loved that last scene between Jen and Eric, very touching and it's nice to see them respect each other and find a bond in both of them having loved Wes. This has been a wonderful story built on an intriguing and original idea - you're right to be proud of it.

Great work,
Camille

Great ending to a fantastic story. And it was good that Jen and Wes were able to say goodbye even if it was in a dream. And it was nice to see her able to move on and have a family.

That was...so...well done. Loved the emotion. It was very well put together, and the flashbacks fit the mood.

Excellent story.

Why didn’t you tell me you never got my review for this chapter? Stupid I totally r&r’ed the day after I did the last chap!

Anyhoo.

I’ll try and remember everything I said! First of all, poor Trip :( And I love the fight scenes as always, very cool. And I’m glad they let Eric come even though he can’t morph. Cause of course he would have gone anyway, no doubt. And I love how personal it is for all of them, for different reasons, and the little mirrors from EOT. And a very satisfying defeat at the end :D I love the last scene too, Logan’s explanation of how Time Force has done this before and why, it makes sense and yet it’s so horrible. Can’t wait for you to get the next chapter up!

--Myriah

Wow.

I read this on RangerBoard, but I was too lazy to review.

Anyway, I love this. The plot is well though out, and all the characters work.

My only thing is that Lucas, Katie, and Trip didn't get much limelight...oh well.

I like this. Excellent Job.

So I started to read the newest chapter, but I got too tired so I'm gonna finish it tomorrow. But then I realized somehow I never reviewed this one, so now I am! :D LOVED this chapter, I can't wait to read the next one! Great work, as always!

Great chapter. And a awsome battle scene with Ransik, very intense and memeroble. And it's good to know that Wes will get the credit and be rememmbered for how he really died. Can't wait to see what the next chapter is about.

A great final fight, even if it made me wince a few times with its realistic violence. I liked the echos of the confrontation in EoT 3, too. Nice to see Eric get his chance for payback, and how he handled it, and nice to see Jen's strength and determination.

Logan's right about the delicacy of time travel, and I can see that Time Force would have some reason for what they did, but of course Wes deserves to be remembered. I hope to see the last chapter soon!