I like how you explained the PEGASUS of Helena Cain with the one I'm writing about. That makes things better. I can start writing more about Garris' sister...

thanks for the update you hade me a little confused with that ch4 post a few wekks ago I dont know if you checked that ou yet but it only had about 1 paragraph on it like it wasent finished or something. any way keep on writing your one of my fav bsg authors and I'm always waiting for one of your updates. -TBS

Thank you for continuing this series - most enjoyable.

Am worried though about the expected duration of now Admiral Tillman life: in book 1 you introduced then killed Adm. Henderson (less than 15 days story time), in Book 1 you introduced Adm. Greene then killed him in Book 3 (less then 100 days story time), and you introduced Retired Adm. Jensen in Book 2 fleshing out and killing him off in Book 3 (less than 22 days story time, slightly longer due to flashback nature of the Admiral's journals); I'm truly worried we'll have another change of command soon, and we're running out of qualified (and experienced) commanders (Commander Peterson dead of internal bleeding - didn't even make it to 90 days, and she was a fiesty one too). I hope you're just cutting donw the active cast to bake for a pithier story and not working from an aversion to authority figures?

Like how you handled the Pegasus question - 2 ships same name, older G. Cain driven to have been decomissioned upon last mission return (which doesn't seem a possibility now)Took care of what Moore did to this proud ship and crew in BSG'03 (Gino?).

BTW love how you have used senior NCO's (The Chiefs/Sergants) most of the stories forget them, yet they are the glue that holds the Active fleet together (and work for a living).

Keep up the good work - hopefully you won't get as convoluted as the multi writer Libra storyline at BattlestarCentraldotcom!

wow I just read all 4 sections and am now anxiously awaiting an update keep up the good work. -TBS

This has been a story that I have truly enjoyed reading, excellent job!

This is a great BSG story. It is different from all the
others... Only please update it a little faster if possible.
I would like to see where U are taking this...

Should story 9 of PEGASUS start making connections with this?

I keep waiting for the rest of this story. Please tell me you're still writing. This family of stories you, Kevin and Dean are writing are fantasic. I'm impressed at all the detail you've added. Most writers don't and it's appreciated. All I ask is for the next part and if I can make one suggestion. Can you break up the sections a little better. Sometimes it is hard to follow when you switch viewpoints and speakers.

Thanks for sharing your epic. Like most good books I couldn't put it down till I finsihed all three parts.

this is the story I have wanted to read sicne the show started. Civilians in the aftermath of the twelve colines massacre rstoring old ships and joining the fight. I also like the elaberate details that went into the characters which i liked for teir doged determi ation and how they iknow their ships and have a liot of courage to become "civillian soliers" and I hope to read the rwst of this story when it is updated

please keep this going I will be waiting thank you

Good Story. Has me anxiously waiting for the rest.

Great story, can't wait for the next installment

This is a really good story, I hope there's more.

Come on mate you are killing me.I keep looking for more of this story daily.Thanks so far.

Mate I have enjoyed your last Two stories and look foward to this one