Nice story so far. I do hope you plan on continuing. I liked that scene with Lina and Amelia both holding onto Zel's ankles. Pretty funny. That whole thing with Zel and Amelia trying to get some couriers, seems like a more Lina thing to do. Hopefully they aren't tuning into her. We don't need any more Lina's that's for sure! I hope some L/G comes into this though. Anway please continue!

Slayers rocks.

I have taken the time to review every one of your stories and gave you good reviews while also reminding you that you need to update your Robotech story!

excellent story so far, berz. I'd like to read the rest of it

Oi Berz-chan, Ogenki desuka? I was just reading this story and way to go tomodachi. As always great work. I'll read your X-men evolution fics later, can't wait to see that weirdness. Well Mata Ne.

this is well a little romantic and cute very well writen

Just wanted to let you know, something happened to your symbols. Beginning quotes became "A" and end quotes "@". and ' is . It's really distracting. Great premise, though, and I can't wait to read the fic once you've fixed the symbol malfunction.

this is great

It's good so far.