where r the speec marks? lol/ its a really god fic and I really like it! Great Job. A

Hey I really liked it. You are really good. You should keep writing them and I will keep reading them. I enjoyed it.

Ok, I never say this, but that was truly horrible.

This is very bad writing. you seem to ahve missed the lessons about quotation marks and capitalisation!

And you reviewed your own story as well. Now that is just SO SAD.

Hehe, it was pretty good I guess. Some cute bits. Although next time you might wanna put quotation marks around speech to make it easier to read. For Indigo Plateau, you should put capital letters since there place names. But yeah I don't wanna get too gramatical in this review! Lol. But one thing, you rated this K. You should raise the rating if you're gonna include...stuff...at the end. Hehe..cute story otherwise.

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that was pretty good you should write another your good at that stuff but i dont think misty would of jumped into it like that and ash is more of a numbskull.bye.

They had sex? o_o

OMG U RITE SUM WRITE GAY CRAP I BLUMMIN H8 ALL O THIS SUGAR COZ U BLUMMIN NEED A ENGLISH LESSON U LESBO GAY ASSHOLE!

that is great! write another aam fic!

uh..It was ok,I guess but if you want me to be honest I'll have to say I've read better.

Very interesting, but a little hard to read. Before you write again, learn how to use "quotation marks".

hey people, it's your favorite writer, scizor. after this story comes price of victory. read it, it's awsome.

This fanfic ruled, Go for the Goal, and Write more! Don't ask me, where I got that saying, I just made it up okay? People, don't think,I'm weird I'm not.

*cough*...*tries to say something but it won't come so she coughs again*...*cough* *finally finds her voice* Well...I guess they did have *cough* fun last night. Nice story, I like the idea of Pokemon 5. I think they are coming out with one in Japan soon. *starts slowly walking away still dazed by the end of the fic* Keep writin'. *shaking her head* They did have fun last night...*cough*. O_O Heh, just kiddin'. _ (I did like your fic)

pretty good. Could use "speech marks"

please write another one

look i like your story hey if you want i need some one to read my story right now i got one.