hey your story is really good and exciting. Could you pleaze finish I am dying to know the rest.

I was reading your story and I think that you did a great job so far setting it up. You really must write more because now I'm curious as to the last child, is it Rogue?

I like it. There are heaps of fantasy X-Men stories out at the moment that follow a theme like this, but yours is one of the better ones. Write more soon!