 LuV2Writ3 2006-07-24 . chapter 1That was so cute! I loved it. So awesome!
You have rendered me speechless (which is quite hard to do) and all I can think to say is that it was so adorable wonderful. ^_^
"Time was quickly flying by, and the kitchen began to look less and less like Eiri’s apartment and more like the candy land board game." --haha, I loved that sentence. Not exactly sure why. Maybe because when I was younger, I used to be absolutely obsessed with that game. ^_^
Thanks a million times for sharing this yummy fic with us Ryuichi/Tatsuha deprived readers! Its awesome!
-x- LuV -x- |
 GothicSuicide 2006-04-18 . chapter 1i just have one word to say: . . .dude. . . |
 Seth 2006-04-08 . chapter 1 Aww! So cute! |
 Lamenting Fox 2006-04-07 . chapter 1Adorable! And funny, of course. And if there was ever a perfect place for Eiri-laughter in a story, you definitely picked it. ^_^ |
 hokage 2006-04-05 . chapter 1 aw! thanks for writing a ryu bday fanfic! it was cute! i love tatryu! as well as eirishu! make more fics! |
 Sakuma Sonnet 2006-04-03 . chapter 1You were right thius was the vcutest and i´m very glad you got that idea oh so bright ^-^
I loved the llama idea too XD (where are you from?)
The grammar mistekes: persons it´s actually people, after that you wrote cleaned when it´s supposed to be cleaning, There´s a part when you write about the clothes "nice, but" and then u explain, but it get´s confusing (just like this paragraph :S sorry `^-^)
and it´s "when the doors opened" otherwise I think that´s all the mistakes, the rest is adorable and i laughed and had that warm fuzzy feeling in the end anand oh so cute and all so glad you wrote again :D
ja ne |
 XxTypoMasterxX 2006-04-02 . chapter 1kawai!1 |
 Shini-chii 2006-04-02 . chapter 1"Ryuichi blinked. “Suck what?”
Tatsuha’s face did burn at that. “No, I mean…this sucks.”"
Ok. I almost die cause of that lol. (Sorry.. I'm a perv u.u)
It was really cute! Excelent gift to Sakuma-sama... and Tatsuha XD.
Really, excelent one =)! |