hey

i love this story, i have read a couple of your stories and i also love your writing style you get accross your message but keep it interesting at the same time.

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The writing was a little rough and uneven, but the story itself was really very good. I thought the fights, the dialog, and the essential, virile liveliness of the characters came through. They read as male, too, which is a nice change from the often overly-femenized characterizations. I especially liked the way you had of showing us this through Raidou's eyes, at a remove, but still connected. Good work.

That was really moving ! And I love how you portrayed Raidou. Hope their relation won't end to soon. I loved the idea that Genma would be remenbered to hope by the dead of a friend...The little bits with Iruka were also great. Poor sweeties.

Thanks for sharing ! XD

i don't usually read yaoi but this is an exception and i'll make an exception for this to be in my c2 too since it's so well written

Yeah. I read the Da Vinci Code. xD Pretty good book.

It was a pretty good beginning, really. It caught my attention right away... But I never knew that Genma could be such a player... poor thing. He doesn't have a positive outlet to... yeah.

And Raidou here- he's so mature. I envy him.

Well, anyways, awesome story, I look forward to reading more.