_ Beautiful

YAY! LINA AND ZEL! NO AMELIA HYPER- JUSTICE GIRL! YIPPY! GREAT WORK So sweet ... Lol I g2g ... BYE CrimsonFire

this too is a great story

i actually like how songs and the stories are twisted together it makes a good blend and helps grasp the emotions ; )

different

Hm,mmmmnnnn sort of sad,but I like when he pulled her to the floor...lol *drools* Hehe sorry,its late and I'm tired.

AWWWWWW! I love your song fic!

I feel all warm and fuzzy inside._

Awesome...That's so...different. I am seeing him a new perspective. It's just so different that I like it so much that I am adding this to my fave story list! Keep it up kay? Bai!

Excellent fic!

Ohhhhh so sad... yet so pretty! I really love how you put this together... though the fact Zelgadis went on a rampage is odd, I loved the story Keep writing! _

Kavi-chan, HyPeR and kawaii one

Wow! That was really good, I love L/Z fics...maybe you could write a sequel :).

Very interesting... Nicely done. I have a respect for people who can do songfics, as both a musician, and a writer, but never being able to craft a story around a song, I love seeing one done well.