 ancientesha 8/18/08 . chapter 1beautiful! loved it:X:X |
 Sam Carter O'Neill 4/5/06 . chapter 1Very nice :-) i enjoyed it a lot! |
 Maggie Sheppard 4/4/06 . chapter 1Very Charming Story! I thoroughly enjoyed it! The Shepard whumpage was delicious, and those two make such a cute couple! You did a great job! LOL! |
 JamSack 4/4/06 . chapter 1Another beautiful peice |
 CapriceAnn Hedican-Kocur 4/3/06 . chapter 1oh, I loved this one! ! ! |
 sniperbob 4/3/06 . chapter 1 Excellent story. |
 SunnyNite 4/2/06 . chapter 1D Okay, I'm good now. I thought you were gonna kill him. ( But you wouldn't be so cruel. Or would you? *shifty eyes* |
 Admiral Lily 4/2/06 . chapter 1*dramatic wiping of the forehead with one hand* Whew! Don't scare me like that! ;D
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 Tinuviel Undomiel 4/2/06 . chapter 1Good, but I'm kind of confused. What was going on in this fic? |
 Beach chick 4/2/06 . chapter 1This is really good. I was sad because I thought John was going to die but I'm glad he made it out safely. The ending was a cute one.
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