good story!! update PLEASE!?!

hey, have you given this up? i hope not. its excellant.

Awesome story, i'm real curiouse about how sirius and remus came to be raising leo and i can't wait for the meeting of james, lily and harry of course! update soon pretty please!

love it! PLEASE UPDATE! :) Smiles!

lol You do know MPD stands for Multi-Personality Disorder too right! rotfl! ;)

Ack, what a horrible place to stop. I must know what happens next.

plz update:-(

Yay! I managed to find this story again! After taking a long break from fanfiction I really didn't want to sift through all the updates in my inbox. o_0
Anyways...I can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon!

i like this fic...i really do, just...CANT YOU MAKE HARRY MEET HIS PARENTS ALREADY?!?!?!!? good lord eleven chapters
ELEVEN CHAPTERS that says he's gonna meet them and he STILL HASN'T pant pant ahem sorry for the rant its just...an
exiting piece.

Please update SOON! I have this story on my alerts and can't wait too see his meeting with his parents! This an awesome fic and I love it.

Well, the idea for the story is fine. The trouble is that you keep getting bogged down in the secondary plot elements and its preventing you from advancing the primary plot, which is 'HARRY GETS A SECOND CHANCE WITH HIS PARENTS', REMEMBER? You said so, after all.

But here we are, eleven chapters in, and that storyline is stuck in the garage because the engine won't start. You put more effort into getting him "evaluated" and in making sure we were all aware that James and Sirius are Aurors, and everything *BUT* your primary storyline.

Sorry, even if your story is well-crafted, and it is, for the most part, the fact that you can't get your story started ruins it. I do plan on sticking around to see what happens, but its not ever going to land on my favorites list.

Yay! I love this fic. You're an awesome writer! I can't wait for the nect chapter. Seriously. I can't wait. So you should update soon! I love the Marauders personalities and such. I wonder what James will think of Harry?
Oh, and I'm ever so glad that this is one out of countless fanfictions that Dumbledore isn't evil or manipulative! I love Dumbledore, until the very end, and I simply cannot read fanfictions that are intent on sullying my memory of him. I think people are just too ** him. And I think you captured his character extremely well. Absolutely perfect, I would say.
I hope you update soon! I'll be checking very frequently!

this is a good story. i like how you have spent time developing the characters and the story. many other parents-are-alive stories jump straight to the truth being revealed and have difficulty going anywhere after that. you, on the other hand, have added elements for a story beyond harry meeting his parents. good job with that. my only concern is that its almost been two months since you last updated. i hope that you haven't abandoned this story.

Umm..maybe you should consider getting a beta or something.

i love it