Pairing’s I like:

Harry/Ginny (she was written specifically for him) see J.K speach.

Ron/Hermione (they’re perfect for one-another)


If Ginny was written for him then that stupid ** of Rowling did a pathetic excuse of a job of it. a mary sue that came out of nowhere. You're just like that guy, ryders of the storm, nothing but a pitiful little fangirl. Except the fact that he saved her pitiful ** in second year what does they have in common and why does Harry suddenly has the need to go for her when he never spoke to her? Or how the ** do you marry your first school girl? Pathetic.
As for Hermione and Ron. Equally stupid. The guy spends his life insulting her and her intelligence, he is pathetically weak, envious, petty and just downright disgusting. She is smart and while not beautiful or pretty, she is at least not ugly, has a great future and I don't see an intelligent woman spending her life without a decent conversation. But of course, Rowling saw retarded fangirls like you and decided to have Hermione's IQ dropping to Ron's level ie 0, none, null, just because the overgrown retarded monkey made a stupid comment on house elfs. Pitiful. I hope that my few english abilities (since it's not my first idiom) were enough to make you know what myself and fans of a real well done story think of people like you and of what Rowling did with her story. Of course there are more, but you probably wouldn't understand due to your fangirlish awe everytime you speak of that filthy piece of literature

Please keep writing. I love the story. :]]

-Kathryn

Don't know why but the fact that Dumbledore kept Harry at Hogwarts and a secret from Lily and James for so long really really rubs me the wrong way...

Cheers!

aCK! YOU stopped just before the all important meeting!! drat. Here's hopping you have something to spare for a distraught fan,
willa1317

p.s I do love you oc's , and I loved confused Ginny!

I'm more interested to find out how Harry reacts to having sisters and (if anyone cares to tell him) that his Ginny was pregnant. I do however want to know his reactions to his parents and every other person who he thought dead. I really like this story and would love to see more

Ohiowritere

I have just read the entire story thus far, knowing that it is unfinished and hasn't been updated in quite some time, but still at least hoping to read the meeting between Harry and his parents, if not also his first day at this Hogwarts, reacting to Ron, Hermione, Ginny, etc.

That said, I am adding this to my favourites list in the hopes that someday, and preferably sooner than later, the story will be updated. It really is a brilliant read, and I can't wait to read more.

Go see the child, Lily!

Tell her it is a curse scar! Get him medical help for it! Don't play games.

Wow! Good stuff! Poor Harry!

Excellent start!

It's a great story, and I love your writing style. I am looking forward to the next chapters.

Oh come on, you can't leave this story like that, please tell me that you are not going to abandon this story!

The premise for this story is very intriguing, and the first few chapters make me want to read on. However...there are a lot of mistakes. Sometimes you got expressions and phrases wrong, but mostly you confused words that sound similar, like writing 'wear' instead of 'where', or 'shown' instead of 'shone', 'they're' instead of their', and 'there' instead of 'they're'. You might want to have a Beta go over this story. I'll keep reading, though, in the hopes that it'll get better. Cheers!

Great job! i've found that with alternate universe stories it's usually a hit or miss. these type of stories are my favorite but most of the ones i read are not very well written. but i have really enjoyed your story.
i like how you didnt have harry meet up with his parents right away, and that you're building your other characters. i'm looking forward to daisy and leo's relationship growing (will harry help out with that maybe?) and seeing harry interact with his sisters.
the way you've created subtle differences in remus is also very interesting because i bet he'd be a very different person if his friends had survived. i like that he's made something of his life =) is that "younger girl" he met - Tonks? or is it another OC?
cant wait for the meeting in the next chappie!
update soon =)
~lilah~

What a truly brilliant story. I absolutely love stories where Harry either time travels past/future or travels to a different dimension. But I found your story, totally different from all those that I've previously read. In that the people Harry knew in his universe, have different occupations, or are alive, or their personalities are different. I think it was well stated in the story familiar strangers, (or something like that!).

I think Harry's meeting his parents, will certainly be interesting. I'm surprised that Harry, doesn't want a name change, to be a normal 16 year old boy, just 'Harry'? But I suppose if he did that, he'd lose himself, and demish all that he'd been through and lost in his universe. Once again, great work!!

This is so good! Please post more soon! :)

-JJ