Great idea. Wonderfully done. I like the poem, though I think it would have been better as a story. Well, keep up writing. You come up with good concepts. I hope others have thought the same

Wow, your poem was amazing. From the first line I was pulled in and I couldn't stop reading 'till I had finished. I thought this poem was incredibly powerful, and I felt so sad at the end. I wouldn't be suprised if this really was the way humans had formed.

I'm adding this poem to my favorites ^^

That was... I don't know... sad, inraging... I know and understand it though...
"Did all the evil that one wolf can.

The wolf slowly rose taller above the pack,

For that wolf had become a man."

That last line - whoa... this is unbalivable...

It makes sence, and I loved it! humans are greedy insects in which purge this world of natural beauty.

Wow, that was very good. Nice rhyming!

This is very good! It sounds almost like a song and it had my attention riveted to the end. I don't know what else to say!