 Embers of Twilight 2008-12-01 . chapter 1Well said. |
 bonniedoll 2007-08-07 . chapter 1Wonderful, as always. Crookshanks, persnally, I don't think Bella is up to anything with her younger cousin; she's trying to protect him, save him from Voldemort's wrath if he were to desert the Death Eaters. And I agree, there aren't enough fics about the Lestrange's marriage. No good ones, anyway. ^_^ |
 The Enchanted Teakettle 2007-07-24 . chapter 1Great fic; I loved it! You've captured Bellatrix's character so well. The title goes well with her character, and her conviction when fighting for Voldemort.
~ TET |
 ABlacksheep 2007-07-23 . chapter 1All I can say is...
wow. |
 Prieda Solo 2007-02-10 . chapter 1Hm maybe its just the political bits in this one, or maybe i;m just tired but it doesn't seem to flow as well s the others. Still bloody brillient though.
The more HP I read, the more I get convinced bella got a kick out of convincing all the young things to join them. Regulus, and Barty certainly. i have many suspicions and theories about Barty. He is my favourite 'essay' character.
Anyway, i should be reviewing your story. Which is so amazingly wonderful i can't think of any constructive criticism and i will move on the the next story. |
 Illusions Industry 2006-12-28 . chapter 1Oh this one is going to be in my top favourites :o!! Incredible. Gave me chills the way she hypnotizes him (us). You can watch the very slow fall of Regulus and it's absolutely mesmerizing.
You should do a fic about Regulus actually :). |
 Crookshanks22 2006-06-07 . chapter 1Chilling and well-imagined. But it's odd, isn't it, that fanfic readers, who are so obsessed with the intimate details of the Malfoys' marriage, never seem to write anything about the Lestranges' marriage. This short sketch suggests that Rodolphus's situation is not enviable . . . or is he so past caring about anything other than murder and mayhem that he simply doesn't notice what his wife is up to with her young cousin? |
 Nulinya 2006-04-16 . chapter 1Nice story, I liked it, but it is kinda sad that Regulus is going to die. Good portrayal of Bella. |
 lnbear2004 2006-04-16 . chapter 1wow. thats a bit scary, the way Bellatrix is able to convince Regulus like that. it sort of gives me insight into her mind. |
 Lirazel 2006-04-13 . chapter 1Oh...very creepy. It's amazing how you managed to flesh out Regulus as a character and make him real despite what little we know about him from canon. I love the contrast between him and the rest of the Black family in his lack of convictions. Very nice, goosebumpy sort of piece. |
 Gabwr 2006-04-11 . chapter 1This was a really convincing story. Great Job! |
 SailorHecate 2006-04-06 . chapter 1I really LOVE your work! You actually are unique. |
 xtotallyatpeacex 2006-04-06 . chapter 1This was brilliant. Really convincing, actually. I loved it. Good job! |
 Maeve Morgan 2006-04-05 . chapter 1Another great one-shot with great insight to the Death Eaters, Blacks, and Slytherins out there.
I love your characterization of Bella, you made me fall in love with her first in "A Keen Observer" and then a little bit more with every other piece you write. She is the personification of what is passion, dark, power, alluring, and frightening.
It marvelled me to see how they thought of the war and the choices they made. In some level, Bella’s reasoning was even logical, when you think of all the war men have fought over the ages and how every time we’ve come with these inventions that are likely to kill us all one day. Imagine what the power of magic wouldn’t do to that.
Regulus was perfect. I never knew what to think of Sirius’s little brother, but he’s very believable, real and Blackish. On a side note, do you think he might be R.A.B.? I believe he could be, given all the history, and there might be more we still don’t know. This piece made me believe it even more. |
 Dot 2006-04-04 . chapter 1Man, Bella almost had me wanting to join the Dark Lord...
Okay, maybe not.
But great story! |