When referring to "him," is she talking about Ben?

wow...just wow.It's really good, especially since you added the minor villans too.The quote is really good idea too.how about Dr Amino? you can call it pride, i guess.

after chamcaster is ghostfreak next?

This is my favorite one...but Kevin's my favorite bad guy XD
So...good job! I liked the angst!

i saw the tv epsiodes where kevin tries to get revenge on ben and all that,but he's my favorite character and all, and in my opinion, he's not evil! geez, people should try and see that...

Unique.

I look forward to reading Charmcaster's part. She's my favorite female on the series. I don't see many stories with her, though. Almost none, to be exact. Great job!

Not bad at all, you seem to be able to do characters, well atleast villans viewpoints quite well, your description is also good. The only thing you need to work on is your spelling I noticed a few mistakes.

when u said wean, you meant when, and when you said threw/thru you mean through...yes I know that is quite an ugly word.
Anyways good job and keep writing.

Your writing is like poetry to me.

Interesting. Let's see... who else can we examine...
There's Joey, Charmcaster, Dr. Animo... The list goes on and on. Who knows why they did they things that they did...?

cool!is the next one on Vilgax

Awesome. This really insightful. Great job!

this is good

It's not missing anything...I don't think...I love this one too! God, your descriptions are amazing!

YAY! KEVIN!
LOL
I love your descriptions! They are beautiful. I really loved the glass analogy...symbol...whatever you want to call it!^^; this is great! Poor, poor Kevin...