This is great. I love it. I l really love it! I read it once and I can't stop thinking about the next chapter. Good job :)

Aww I love KevinxAlyssa! I wish you'd continue! you did a great job on it so far but plz dont abandon it!

Hey, this is a great story! I can't wait for another chapter! Or, is there? Well, I hope so!
I love Kevin X Alyssa!

I loved it. This is my favorite pairing for RE:Outbreak.

You wrote them both so well... I can't wait for chapter two. It's just.. so AWESOME. Great job, dude. Hurry up and post that next chapter, please?

Well, I've gotta agree with the othdas, this is a excellent first chapter. You actually managed to make me, the reader, cringe at the description of the Undead chowing down on a person unfortunate enough to become their lunch as Alyssa was making her way through the city. She certainly was brave, I would never venture down into the Subway (Going underground is certain death, especially if there happens to be a busload of dead people stuck in the tunnels).

That aside, I loved the characterization of Kevin Ryman, and his determination to get Aylssa to at least trust him enough to tag along with her, despite her misgivings toward him. He just had to tease her, didn't he?

All in all I enjoyed the first chapter of this story!
If you ever decide to continue with it, I'm lurking around.
SAKURA123

NIce job. Please post chapter 2 as soon as you can.

Great story love it so far.

This is seriously awsome! Very well done.

The only problem I spotted, was that Kevin's last name is Ryman, no "H", but aside from that, awsome work. Continue please!

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Hm. This is interesting so far. Very descriptive. You should be proud of this chapter. One question though. Are you bringing anyone else from the outbreak series into the mix? Looking forward to the next chapter.