 Elena Chamberlain 10/10/03 . chapter 1Brilliant, angsty story. Absolutely original. It's nice to read about serious Venus beating the always composed Kunzite in terms of words. He never strikes me as the kind of uncertain guy as portrayed in this fic. |
 Magician 9/28/03 . chapter 1Wow.
Just wow. This is amazing! |
 jade 3/3/03 . chapter 1This was awesome. I loved the way that you made Venus serious. Although I'm a little lost as to who Venus was talking about. Kunzite was talking about Zoicite right? Ah, well hmm.I loved this one, your so good at writing this vignettes. I wish I could write like this! |
 C-kun 6/4/02 . chapter 1Bizarre. Bizarre, but really, really good. I approve! Especially since its a general and a Senshi. I can't resist stories like that. Venus being serious is a nice change. |
 White Wave Dancer 11/18/01 . chapter 1I LIKE THIS! *expertly ignores comments about cutting back on sugar* A VERY GOOD STORRIE! Er...STORY! (Sorry about that) |
 Diamond Rouge 7/1/01 . chapter 1that was a really, really great fic. nice and deep...and yes, it was very refreshing to see Minako acting serious; i like her better that way, you know? good job on this story, it's excellent. ciao! |
 VO1 5/19/01 . chapter 1 wow! amazing! so much angst in such a short amount of time! incredible! definately keep up the great work! |
 Earth Citty 5/19/01 . chapter 1 Intresting story. |