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Fighter37
2008-03-21
ch 6,
abuseGreat story, I love it. I can't wait to read more. Please say that you are going to continue with the story and update.
lildevil0644
2008-01-04
ch 6,
abuseThis is a great story! Can't wait for the next chapter to come out!
Hanyuchick
2007-06-20
ch 5,
abuseI would like more! and Dag and Dawn would be a really good couple.
rogue20
2007-06-13
ch 5,
abusehey it gone been a good story and i hope that will be a Lancelot and dawn story they are hot together
Damia - Queen of the Gypsi'...
2007-05-13
ch 5,
abuseTease.
- Damia
Eamane Aldarion
2007-05-01
ch 5, anon.
abuseOh wow, you do not know how extremely happy you have made me this very day my friend. I haven't ever given up on your story. I've been coming by a few times each month just to see if you had updated, and you did. It has taken a while, but I'm sure you had your reasonings. I'm just very glad to see you back mellon nin.

The last chapter before this one was such a cliffhanger, so I have been antsy ever since chapter 4. I'm glad Dawn is back to her human form, and I'm wondering how Tristan will really deal with the fact that his little friend is actualy an almost grown woman. I don't know if Dawn being human now, will have any change in attitude towards her from the knights.

Tristan and Dagonet mostly, I think might have a few odds and ends with it. Your hawk and companion suddenly turns out to actualy be a young human female! ... ... ... That can be a bit of a shocker. Not only that, she was and still is the key, former sister to the Vampire Slayer and not even from your own timeline.

So, yeah, I'd be a bit scarce myself for a while. Shock sets in, then embarrassment and other emotions will set in.

I wonder if any of them had spoken to her personaly when she was a hawk? You know how some people like to speak their minds when they are alone or with an animal companion. You are usualy bound to speak your feelings, thoughts, or whatever is on your mind at the time being. So who knows.

Lancelot will most likely give her a hard time, cause its Lancelot. I know he has a bit of a soft and caring side to him, its just getting him to actualy show it that might take work for our poor Dawn. Also I doubt he will take it well with her needing to train. You know how men were in those times, unless they were a Spartan, then that is a whole different thought procxess completely.

In any case, I am very glad to see that you are back. I hope for good this time. I look forward to your next chapter and I will keep watch no matter how long it takes.

Till your next post.

Ea~
EverBear01
2007-04-30
ch 5,
abusepoor Dawnie! BTW I love this story! Quick question, Hawks Age alot quicker then humans do...so has Dawn aged at all or has the Key in her kept her the same age?

M lol. I wonder :P
Aomizuoko
2007-04-29
ch 5,
abuseHello, I can't believe after so long you actually updated! I like the story. I wish you would update faster though. Good job on the writing! I never even read king arther books...which version are you going by again? I kind of want to pick it up. The only arther books/movies I've seen are what plays on Sci-fi
speaker4thesilent
2007-04-29
ch 5,
abusefive star! Still shorter than I'd like, with a lot of time in between, but i know what that's like too. Still a good story. Update soon!
Amy
2007-04-29
ch 4, anon.
abuseHave you abandoned this story? I really like it and am curious to see where you are going with it.
Akasha Sundancer
2007-01-06
ch 4,
abuseI've always had my suspicions about that bird... LOL, anyhow, I love how you're writing this. The imagery is great, the plot is amazing, and I honestly can't wait for your next update! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write the next chapter soon!
-Scarlet Rose de Lioncourt
PS: It might be obvious and I'm just really stupid, but what's the pairing for this one?
Gakuen-Tenshi201
2006-11-20
ch 4,
abuseI LOVE IT UPDATE SOON
Black Opal1
2006-10-19
ch 4,
abuseplease, please, please update this as soon as you can...I really wanna read the continuation on this story...
Helea
2006-10-17
ch 4, anon.
abuseI love this... why havent you updated it? it is really good... you should join its a Site called Twisting the Hellmouth. A site dedicated to Buffy Crossover fanfiction if you havent joined it already!
gerber
2006-07-27
ch 4, anon.
abusemore please...
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