So awesome!! Col telling the whole story from Dan Phantom's point of view!

Thank you for this wonderful story! I think you did a wonderful job giving depth to Dan's character. I loved how you added so many humorous aspects of the show; the fakeout-makeouts and puns were a real blast to read, especially since they are viewed from such a skewed perspective.

That was very interesting, but I was hoping for a more detailed ending.

If Dan can create inter-dimensional portals, why did he not simply bypass the shield through the ghost zone?

Okay, I'll admit I feel incredibly stupid for asking, and that I should probably be lavishing your greatness with lots of lovely praise instead of asking such a lame question, but what does "push-packed" mean, exactly? I can infer from the context that it means like, buff, or something to that effect. Is that all? I looked it up on Urban Dictionary, but it didn't have a definition, and when I looked it up on Google I actually got this chapter of the fic as one of my results. XD;

I've actually already read Indemnification up to Chapter 18 - the most recent chapter as of me writing this review. I was feeling a little lost with all the flashbacks and allusions to things in your other fics, so I thought I'd give this one a look. It's good - I really, REALLY love Dan in here. He's so crazy and amazing. And you fit all of the scenes in between the lines of the TUE movie quite nicely. I'm envious of your supreme descriptive skills (Dan's "blisteringly negative reputation" in Indemnification was probably the most amazing wording I've seen for a while - and yes, I get excited over things like that). And the fact that you ended up creating a completely original and innovative plot is an incredible accomplishment. Inspiration comes easily to great minds, I've heard, but it must have been a fairly decent amount of time before you got around to planning everything out. But what do I know? Maybe you're just making things up as you go along. :D

Keep up the good work! ♥

OMG!! This is awesome!
I love TUE, I love Dan, and I LOVE THIS STORY!!

Nice.

O.O! That was AMAZING! BRILLIENT! LOVE IT! (pause) Except for Dani melting. THAT was sad. (sniffle) This is an amazing fic, like nothing I've ever read before! And I LOVE stories told from a different perspective than they normally are! This is uber-cool!

Tie-dyed Trickster

LOVE your characterization of Dan. The funniest part, though, is the fact that the actual dialogue from the show is weaker than your own. It seems a little silly and out of place amidst all your serious awesomeness.

An absolutely wonderful story, and my only nitpick is that I kind of wish that Dan had spent more time practicing his Ghost Wail rather than running off the Amity Park the instant he mastered it.

Omigod. . .


I LOVE you now. ^_^ Truely awesome work, my friend. I bow to my computer in nothing less than utmost respect. *bowbow*

An amazingly well written fic! ^^ excellent characterisation, I loved how you portrayed Dan!

EXCELLENT! I liked the way you focused on dan's thoughts, i also liked you explanation of what he did for the ten years after the Nasty Burger Exploded. Can't wait for the sequel!

umm...i feel really stupid right now but...what does 'push-packed' mean? That one's always confused me. Could you help me out here? I'll leave a real review at the end of the story. loving it so far though...

Damn, that was good. They never did decribe exactly why it was 'better left unsaid'. I'm going to have that graphic image in my head every time I watch The Ultimate Enemy. XDD

Good writing, keep it up!

Eleirah

next do Danny' POV!
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