I love how you wrote this! :)

This is, beautiful. X3

Did Sasuke die?

Whoa. Pretty dark, this one. But I like it. :)

Wait...does the second bite mean that she kissed him once he was dead, or did she let him go?

...Freakin' gosh WHY! (had to get that out), anyway back too main topic this was aswome ending was a little weird for me I guess it was aswome though " Haruna Sakura took a second bite of the devil's fruit" that was so good wow though I wish you would have put in Sasukes piont of view & how the battle started. Not tring to seem like I dont like your story it's just- I guess if I were you I would have done it a little different but with your words (obviously) sorry if I seem rude couse of it it's just my oppion, I guess.

Thank You

From:MIB

O...I like. o.0 I love the emotion and twisted angst of it all. Great job!

wow...just like every of your stories, this amazes me as well. I dont know what's so special about them, but your stories alwas keep me stunned and awestruck in the end.

You're really gifted!

ooh...

Very nice-compact, I guess. Not a lot of unnecessary words. Yay, you. Keep writing!

Toodles,

bobalina

Wow...nice! Beautifully written! I Love it! Haha. Oh...and again...please please please update your Shattered Minds! Please please please...I'm begging you. Thanks!

-xelagirl2

wow...

that...was...AMAZING!1

omg, poor sakura

men suck!

yet another wonderfully written story..!

Intense and remarkable. Wow. I should keep an author alert on you on every fic you update...actually, I should have doen that long, long time ago! *clicks button*