I'm forced to use the common vernacular: whoa, that's hawt.

beautiful sethos/amelia. you capture their characters, and their angst, very well.

Really good. There are hardly any AP fics, and you write them very well.

Wow, this is very good! You captured the characters perfectly, I always wondered what Sethos really felt.

Finally, a new AP fic! Now I must say I am an extreme Emerson fan anf find Amelia and Emerson the best pairing in literary history! But, I have wondered... Very well written, and I hope you write more (maybe an A/E fic next time).

OH EM EFF GEE.
i was listening to "American Woman" while reading this and I was like "OH EM EFF GEE, AMELIA REMINDS ME OF THIS WOMAN!" cause like, the first book (which is the only one i've read so far) the egyptians are all like "GET AWAY AMERICAN WOMAN!" when in reality...she is english.

good story. :D