|Reviews for The Rohan Pride Chronicles, Part III: Terms|
| Kiiimberly 5/11/11 . chapter 8
I wonder what changed. Hopefully, it will help her. I know she won't get completely "over it" but she can begin to let go of part of it and start to live a happier life.
| Kiiimberly 5/11/11 . chapter 7
Poor Guthwyn! Hopefully everything will be better now that she has told her brother.
| Kiiimberly 5/11/11 . chapter 6
I feel so bad for her-Haldor keeps haunting her even though he's gone.
| Kiiimberly 5/11/11 . chapter 5
I think it's hilarious how everyone is suspicious when they think Guthwyn is in "love." Tun is such a great character, it's sad that he loves her and she doesn't though.
| Kiiimberly 5/11/11 . chapter 4
This sounds horrible but I'm glad they're gone-they caused Guthwyn so much pain.
| Kiiimberly 5/11/11 . chapter 3
I wonder if Cobryn loves her. He might. I don't know why he would risk so much for her otherwise.
| Kiiimberly 5/11/11 . chapter 2
I think it's great that everyone is so concerned about Guthwyn-she needs people to care about her again. Borogor did but he's obviously not there for her anymore.
| Kiiimberly 5/11/11 . chapter 1
Thank you so much for the reply :) I love hearing back from the authors. Although it's tedious to review for each chapter, I feel as if I should because I know it takes a lot of time to write each chapter. I read the first few chapters this morning before my AP test. Hehehe. So I'll leave my reviews now :D
| Ariana Ethaitrius 1/27/11 . chapter 20
Wow, this was amazing. (Its Ariana Ethaitrius, I've changed my username to the now obvious one, and the reason?: I adore Legolas!). I also adore your story and I liked the ending. I loved Borogor too, and I was quite shocked that he is dead. I also adored Haldor (I can't resist an evil sexy Elf, I loved his character) and I hope that the epelogue will be a Legolas/Guthwyn romance.
I really want to write a Legolas/OFC(maybe Haldir love triangle?)romance, but I am stuck on plot ideas.
I love the trilogy and this was a great chapter/end to the story/s.
| Ariana Ethaitrius 1/25/11 . chapter 1
Wow, this was a great chapter! I love the brother ad sister bond. I was confused by this line:
"Haldor retreated into a corner, still muttering incessantly."
But it was a great chapter!
| kycatsfan 9/13/09 . chapter 20
Once again, I am in total awe at both your incredible plot and your amazing writing!
I loved the reunion of the former slaves at Isengard (probably butchered the spelling). Even though the later story was heart wrenching (to say the least), I couldn't stop smiling when Guthwyn saw the guys.
Oh my gosh, you did such an excellent job with the scene where Guthwyn tells Eomer about what Haldor did to her! I'm glad it was him that she told. I don't know how he managed to hold in his wrath and disgust. I was practically sobbing all the way through it. The dialogue was perfect, I could just hear her with the stuttering and hesitations you used so masterfully.
Oh, and in Chapter 17, I thought the suspense was going to kill me! I knew what Eomer was going to have to find out, and I am telling you that I had to take a break after that chapter, and I was quite literally wobbling on my legs.
And when she came to exchange herself for the children! Seriously, how many times did you want to make me weep? Let me assure you that you've succeeded on several occasions.
Then she was found, and I could picture the whole scene with Eomer cradling her body... extremely moving.
Then finding out what had been carved into her back on multiple occasions. That time tears were accompanied by gritted teeth and balled fists, as was normal for me when dealing with Haldor.
OK, so I've gone through some of the most moving moments for me (stress the word some). Let me just complement you once again on this amazing story. I honestly have never read anything like it, be it fanfiction or a novel. You have a great gift for plotlines, and in making your characters come to life. You give details that others sometimes skip, but which makes all the difference. I don't know if I have ever felt such a wide range of emotions when reading a story. Sometimes I would laugh aloud, sometimes silent tears would roll down my cheeks, sometimes I sobbed (quite loudly, I assure you, as someone came to check on me), and many times I was so sick to my stomach that I feared I, like Guthwyn, would not be able to hold on to the contents of my stomach.
I absolutely cannot wait to read the epilogue, and as it's already up, I'm not going to wait one second after I finish posting this review! I can't wait to see Guthwyn's reaction to finding out Eowyn is to marry the very man who killed her love! Oh Borogor... I completely understand your reasoning about why he had to die, but that doesn't make me happy about it. I think I fell in love with him before Guthwyn did!
I am also very interested in how Guthwyn continues to cope with the mental torment she is still suffering.
OK, so this was probably the longest review in the history of reviews, but let me just say once more that this story is spectacular, and I can only hope that the creative genius that you obviously are, you will create another wonderful story. What else am I to read once I've finished the Epilogue? I'm not sure anything would measure up to this.
| Olivia 2/28/08 . chapter 20
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! Those last few chapters were superb. I felt so many different emotions throughout Terms, from horror at the knife-wounds discovery to such sorrow when Hammel had told Guthwyn that he knew Borogor loved her. It still makes me so depressed that she realized it too late. :( I am so happy that I still have a huge epilogue to read, because I would go insane if this was the end of Guthwyn's story.
I agree very much with Callie; you are really talented, and I am sad that you couldn't publish such a great story as this because it's FanFiction! If you have any original work on other writing sites I would love to check it out!
| NotAfraidToLive 12/14/07 . chapter 20
im sure that you are tired of my reviews, but i must admit that i just finished part 3 and i laughedand cried throught this story, it is incredible. so due to my inpatience i must say that i am going to read the epilogue. and i do hope this story ends happy becuase it has had so much sorrow that i would say it would be fair to let light into the end. i love this story and your writting!
| GwenevieveGreenleaf 5/1/06 . chapter 20
WOW. Sry I haven't updated for like 2 chapters...I've been sick with laryngitis and stuff. Which means I was practicly bed ridden...gr. Anywho, that "The end" thing almost gave me a heartattack. I was like "WHAT!" and then "OH...yay!". I can't begin to explain how anxious I am to read both epilogues and see how Guthwyn reacts to seeing Faramir as Eowyns fiance. Hahaha thats so ironic the guy that killed guthwyns love turns out to be her sisters love. Plus Guthwyn and Boromir were close. It's like a soap opera! LOL JK
Write more or I'll have to track u down and force u to write more...(evil laugh)!
| Andi-Scribbles 5/1/06 . chapter 20
OH WOW. When I read "The End" I was like "WHAT? NO!" But you have more, so it's all good *eyes suspiciously* It had better be a nice fat epilogue- in fact, you can just make it a whole new fanfic followup on Guthwyn. Because, really- she needs her happy ending (or alternately, not so happy ending. I'm game for that too, though!) And also, I am anxious to see what happens when Guthwyn meets Faramir. Something's GOT to happen, I mean- come on, he killed her love! Not that it's his fault, but there's bound to be a little rift there, no matter if he was doing the right thing. But seriously- write more soon, and a lot! As a writer myself, I know that's a completely insensitive and easier-said-than-done kind of thing to say, but I'll say it anyway because I LOVE THIS TRILOGY! Wooh. *Wipes brow*. Hope that's a good enough review for now. I expect more soon! Excellent job!