Is there more? This is really promising, even if it doesn't have enough Angst for me (like over Leo's death, I felt you brushed by the subject, but didn't dleve in).

Great chapter, and don`t worry I totally understand how the last month of school eats time.

I can`t wait for them to define their relationship and their vacation.

I`m also glad that you`ll follow this post west wing, the santos admin should be lots of fun.

Post more ASAP.

Loving this story... Great chapter... Love how descriptive you are...

JENNIFER

This a great story. I loved the ep on sunday. Next week will be great hope you can work in the thing with josh and donna in the next segment, I am sure u will keep writting!

To quote Donna: That was so sweet! :)

Seriously, Josh's point of view was wonderful. I really hope that he has that picture somewhere in his head! Because when I saw Donna talking to Charlie I had another vision of her leaving. Again.

Love your story!

This was so perfect.. I loved it... I want them to have a future like that too... Loved this...

JENNIFER

Great chapter, I loved how both of them want their lives together, I just can`t wait for their talk.

This is an amazing fan fiction! I like how you make this story interesting with-out being too un- realistic. Google search 'The West Wing Transcripts', and you'll find the scrrenplays if you ever need to re- read an episode. Can't wait for more! :D

Amazing Simply amazing I love it...I felt each and every emotion... This was a great chapter I can not wait to read the next chapter...

JENNIFER

beautiful.

Excellent chapter, I loved how both of them understands how deep their feelings are, and are secure about it.

Post more soon.

Great chapter, I just hope that JD will have a good talk soon.

BTW, you should put lines (* for example) or something to note the changes.

I LOVED this! Especially part 2...so sad. As was the episode. Even though I've known that it had to hhapen; the ep where everyone finds out about Leo's death, it was still painful for me. But...
"In typical Josh style that will come later." - now this is the perfect sentense! I think that no one could've imagined that history will have to repeat itself. And that once again, Josh will lose someone on the day of election.
If you'll have inspiration after next week's episode, I would love to read more!

I could tell that you loved last night's episode just as much as I did. You really did a good job on picking up on some of the important details from the show. Nice job.

Good start. Look forward to more.