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| FireOpalWaterOpal 2006-06-03 ch 8,  | abuseOk...You said if there were enough complaints then you would finish. Complain, **, complain, beg. blah, blah, blah...Ok Please..please...please continue this story. Have you read Lucky Me? This has soo much potential...It could be soo cool. Please finish it. |
| IMHO Nienna 2006-04-09 ch 8, | abuseThis was all kind of disconnected in a way where you couldn't tell who was talking and what was going on and now she's with the X-Men like what out of the blue? It's hard to follow but I still enjoyed it for the most part. |
| IMHO Nienna 2006-04-09 ch 6, | abuseKind of a confusing chapter but the story so far is good and the first chapter was great. |
| Crimson Shards 2006-04-05 ch 8, | abusethis a'int exactly a completed story... ur just screwing with ur readers heads by saying that. it was a fun read though and i like how u portrayed logan and gave hints on Whisper's life throughout. (come on admit it logan hooked up with storm and she ditched him...right?) well hope yah do reconsider and continue this p.s. yah do know that by blocking annoymous reviews your basicly insuring a lot less feedback since many people out there are lazy hehehhe (damn u made me sign in thats cruel) |
| giveGodtheglory 2006-04-03 ch 8, | abuse*LMBO at the last line* *bug bug bug* Too many questions left unanswered. :D The style of a series of half-overheard conversations is intreguing. And this is a really disjointed review. Sorry. God bless! |
| giveGodtheglory 2006-04-03 ch 1, | abusew00t! |