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Reviews for: Beginnings
untold.secrets
2009-07-08 . chapter 1
I LOVE SPRING TOO. i love the story, they're such a nice couple
soujiroteddy
2006-08-21 . chapter 1
ooh i likey, but i wish it was longer! I'm happy u let soujiro have a happy life by being married to the loveable character Misao and also that he'll have a child of his own! good job! ^_~
Minamonoshi
2006-05-28 . chapter 1
GREAT!!I LOVE IT SO MUCH!
Hopeless Lady
2006-05-21 . chapter 1
Short...
still very sweet and enjoyable
try to write more eh?
Hack...
2006-04-15 . chapter 1
GREAT START!*laugh happily*
Angel-chan
2006-04-11 . chapter 1
I think I like this shot!
you wrote it beautifully
Mischievous Lass
2006-04-08 . chapter 1
Very good,I alawys want to read something like this,but Sou's attitude is still as innocent as a child,which is cute! ah...
White Rabbit Tale
2006-04-06 . chapter 1
This defines the phrase "short but sweet." Truely a great spring themed S/M fic! Unborn babies kicking is about the most spring themed thing ever. I love the feeling of new life and beginning, especially on Soujiro's part. Your characterizations of Soujiro and Misao are flawless. This is exactly how I see Misao when she is older and "settled down." I love how Soujiro is like one of those husbands who get really excited over everything. So sweet.
Also, great use of words. You really had a poetic feel to this whole piece.
ms.marigold
2006-04-04 . chapter 1
Hello~~!!

I truly enjoyed reading a SouMisao drabble. I totally adore this pairing. And I'd be looking forward to more of your one-shots.

Ganbatte.
teddy bear
2006-04-04 . chapter 1
Very nice one-shot, I really love reading stuff like this about SouMi
but why can't your guys write something more..."unique"
like angst or something?
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