great plot but i really wish you said more about how they felt or she felt...you know...so it is a romance...like it says it's supposed to be :P

Great start. Keep it going! Knowing how they all feel about her, you have a great plot started!!

Hmmmm, Interesting.

It's the attack of the cliffhangers! Oh dear... There've been so many of them lately I'm bound to fall off one of the cliffs and disappear into the abyss. (Translation: PLEASE write more of this before I go insane!)