OH. MY. GOD. Now that's some good prose, my friend! Also, is it me or are some parts of it from other fanfics you've done, cos I can definately recognise the "Nightmare" part from another of your stories, "Good Boy". It's brilliant all the same. In my mind, the victim is Satoshi because he's so quiet and he always seems so vunerable. The "He" of the story would either be Krad because he's just sadistic like that, or Kei, because he is always so horible towards Satoshi, in both the manga and the anime. SEE YA, and please read "Family" and "Kokuyoku no Maigo", two storis of mine. Both will be updated soon.

Wow that was cruel but I like the end.
very well written!

Amazing story... and very beautiful.

Wow. That's all that I can really say about this. I loved this piece. First person pieces are usually very hard to write, and the way that you wrote it, was very well done. It honestly really moved me. Keep up the good work.

Wow, a beautiful piece, really. It really hurts to read, but there is a sense of...reality that you get when you finish. It sounds so unreal, but yet, it is so real. An innocent naive person, becomes a slave to a cruel, heartless man. In the end, the person exacts their revenge. But it doesn't turn out the way they dreamed it. Instead of satisfaction, there's a wave of regret, panic, sorrow, guilt. In the end, they never really get their revenge. In the end, he's won.

So sick and distorted... I must admit that it's well written, indeed, but that doesn't make me like the story. *shakes head*
I do love the fact, though, that she kills him. An eye for an eye - or close to it at least...

I think what really makes me dislike this story is that one can't help but put oneself in the narrators place. And that just turns disgusting!

So, just my thoughts on this fic...
I'd much rather have you spend you talent on happier stories. This is so unpleasant to read.

Wyrdling

This writing is great! It's really emotional and lots of my random questioning of the reason of life is in there. Sometimes I get so depressed, wondering about routines like the main character of your fic. But y'know, I don't think that the person could've suddenly become in denial. I mean at the beginning, the person was saying that he was hurt. So he wasn't in denial. Or not until he was drove into insanity.

And I actually think that the person is a guy. I'm a girl, but I seem to like to think that way. Like I said earlier, this fic is great and I'm adding it to my Favorite's list.

My Thoughts on Who It Could Possibly Be:
Mister: OC?
Sufferer: Krad

Heh heh. Why I thought of that? Well I like to read some fics like this and wonder if it's before the events or after. I think this fits the former category. Krad was hurt and he turned all weird and stuff. Forget about all the Black Wings. A long review this has been, so bye!

That was touching...truly touching. I am in awe. That made a lot of sense. The one thing I didn't get is how it was a DNAngel fic...maybe , if you care to spell it out for me, you could email me or something...

Wow...

For some reason, the characters that naturally came to mind were Daisuke and Krad, as another person said...course, ya know, it could just as easily be an original work...just, wow. You defiinitely captured the human mind.

"Have you ever been scared to say those words even though you really want to?"

Hell yes.

I'm sorry but what exactly does this fic have to do with DN ANGEL? It's too far from the original to be an AU, not to mention the characters (though with intention) weren't clearly stated.

Was it really necessary to put this in the DN ANGEL section? Or did you just want to show-off your knowledge or skill?

If you wanted something "deep" like this, why didn't you announce this as an ORIGINAL and put it in a site that advocates such works? I'm sure fictionpress AND other such sites would LOVE to have this in their website, not to mention it would be more appropriate to place it there. As a consequence, this fic comes off as pretentious.

This is not fanfiction. This is a piece of work, though well-done, that has been put in the wrong place.

Good day! ^__^

purple_lantern

o...steph!~ deep stuff there!!~ i'm gonna guess...atleast...20 or so reviews for this one ^^, and it's gonna keep on growing and yea...u know..throughout this whole thing i had the idea of Daisuke and Krad in this situation, donno y. does it seem like Daisuke is the most innocent and Krad's just...yea...evilly lustful in a way?? yea...so...ttyl on msn! xD

and i loved it!! ^^
ja!~

So sad yet you can't get your eyes off it. I think the person in the 1st POV is Risa or Daisuke. Anyway she kill and a sex slave to Krad because he is evil and do bad things to people and he is a he. The mister is Satoshi.

Risa or Daisuke is 14 or 15.
Satoshi is 17.
Krad is 19.

So this either RisaxSatoshi or DaisukexSatoshi. That what I figure in the story. I don't care if it a Yaoi or

^^;; That was... intense... in a good way! ^_^ But, wow, that really made me think...

oh god...this was good and yet...a little disturbing. I have to say that this is one of your best works yet. It's...unbelievable. I managed to read it all and by the end, I was close to tears. It was that good and sad. Adios.

P.S: I updated Bloody Relief.