oh, this was so funny! then near the end mikan says:

“Wah, that reminds me, no one ever told me what a honeymoon is!”

very very funny!

~Najika-chan

all i have to say it lol loved it x)

ahahaha... this fanfic is so funny.. good job:)

nice one...

So cute! Your characterisation was spot on too. I really enjoyed this. :)

I dont get it. Is it suppose to be natsmuikan or rukaru. Coz in the summary u said slight natsumikan but the stury concentrate on them. so it's?

It's very long for one chapter.

Thank you.

like i understand the story... what was natsume thinking? argh... can you explain it to me?

hello! i really like your story...especially the way captured and maintained Mikan's innocence, as well as Natsume's, well, attitude...hehehe

loved
hw bt sum more

Nice fanfic. I think it would have been better as a chapter story though.

hhehehehe..
Nice!
Luv,
Yume

Foru words...ok mor elike eight.
You.Are.So.Slick.
You.Are.A.Genius.

heh that was a good fic

Great story!! ^-^

There were a lot of funny moments, like this one:

“Isn’t that flattering, Natsume-chan?” Tsubasa came over and smiled down at them, clapping a hand on their shoulders. “You’re more exciting than detention!”

Keep up the good work! :D

I loved this! Great job!