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| Callie Beth 2006-06-19 ch 5,  | abuseI loved this chapter! I liked how Ryan was going with Zach, because now they have this friendship relationship going on since they were both defending Kendall when she was in the coma... And I don't know, I like the Zach/Ryan friendship thing. "Hart-Slater" Zach quipped. hehehehe, I liked that part. And Jackson was very in-character. (If you can't tell, I am a very strong person for in-characterness.) However, I found that Babe didn't seem so Babe-ish.. At first when she was talking I thought it was Ryan. However, everyone else seemed good. I liked the stuff between Simone and Zach. |
| Callie Beth 2006-06-19 ch 4, | abuseGahh! scary!Josh In this chapter!! "...she would strangle somebody, probably and preferably Babe." hehehe, my favorite line of the chapter. I also liked Josh's character in this chapter when he's talking about how Erica wanted him aborted etc. - very Josh-like. |
| Callie Beth 2006-06-19 ch 3, | abuseI just love Zach. He's probably my favorite character... The first paragraph was very appropriate. Strange that Dixie would call with the news... But I liked it. |
| Callie Beth 2006-06-19 ch 2, | abuseHmm... Interesting. I would like to hear more about how Josh found out that Erica is his biological mother. I liked the nursery-room-color distractions. Erica seemed very Erica in this. Good job with her character. |
| Callie Beth 2006-06-19 ch 1, | abuseVery strange reading this, after all that has gone on with Kendall and JR and the coma and everything. I like the relationship between Kendall and JR in this chapter. I liked it when they were friends... But anyway, I am excited to get to the stuff about Josh. I really wonder what will happen when he finds out Erica is his mother... |
| ILoveMyAnimals 2006-05-04 ch 5, | abuseI'll be sitting on the edge of my seat awaiting the next chapters!! Keep up the GREAT work!! |
| GalitMirav 2006-04-15 ch 5, | abuseAwesome! Simone forgives Zach. It's great. This story on the whole is great too. I can't wait for the Zendall rescue and reunion. Keep up the good work. And please check out my AMC story if you have time. It's Zendall, so I'm sure you'd like it. |
| tkzslover 2006-04-14 ch 5, | abuseSimone forgives Zach...Yah Simone! Bring on Chpater 6! |
| lilrocky80 2006-04-12 ch 5, | abuseplease update soon please i love this story |
| tkzslover 2006-04-10 ch 1, | abuse(pounding on the table) Chapter 5, Chapter 5, we want Chapter 5! JK, Please Ive been waiting all day for an update! Please? |
| tkzslover 2006-04-08 ch 4, | abuseThANKS FOR THE UPDATE! Josh is nutty! Please have Zach find Kendall! And YOU...PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
| Jillianna 2006-04-05 ch 3, | abuseOh!! I Love It! Update SoOn! |
| tkzslover 2006-04-05 ch 3, | abuseYeah Zach, Yeah Zach, YEAH Zach! Great update! Where did Kendall go?...I think I have somewhat of an idea... |
| lissa46068 2006-04-05 ch 3, | abuseI like this story so far, love that Zach just thinks of the divorce as a technicality. Update again soon. |
| tkzslover 2006-04-04 ch 2, | abuseWOW! This is really really good! I cant wait for the next update. |