why so many cliffhangers you leave me wanting more...

Emily plz forgive your father he didnt even know...

Melanie don't die!

Batman hurt them bad!

so many questions left unanswered so good must read more plz update for the sake of mankind! :D

Now there's a cliffhanger..

I realy like your work and the terry melaine paring keep it up

So, yeah, a little cliche. I have no room to judge; I'm cliche to no end. But I'll keep reading to see what you do.

Hm, I'm not sure if it's stereotypical or not. I'll plow on ahead and let you know. ;)

Interesting that Terry's kept tabs on her over the years.

So I just read the first chapter and decided I like it enough to go on to chapter two. I'm a Melanie/Terry shipper, but there doesn't seem to be many of us out there. I'm excited to see you (possibly) writing that pairing.

When you said Max was married with two kids I feared you were going to go through with the Terry Dana pairing.

This was a great start to a story I look foward to finishing.

Please, Please, Please update! It's too good to leave it like that.

Hmm, interesting. *looks at Melanie's dead body* I'm curious to see what happens next. I hope she isn't dead. Then there'd be some cliché bonding time with Terry and Meri and it'd just be so bad.

you are so killing me. i love this story.

ace

Your story has taken some great twists and turns so far - good work; can't wait to see how it all ends.

Tracey

How did you know i'm a sucker for awesome twists? But i nkow you know i hate cliffhangers... :P you're forgiven only because this chapter was so AWESOME! I seriosly didn't see that coming, melanie... oy... can't wait till the next chappie. Keep up the great work:D... one last question, how do you write so wonderfully? you're descriptions are so full and flow so smoothly it makes me jealous; trust me, that's a compliment.

SB18

Aw I don't hate you...I love your story! lol I can't wait to read the next chapter. *HINT HINT*

Nice installment. Please continue soon.

Oh no you didn't! how could you end it there? LOL, loved the part where terry forgot Bruce was still on the phone (cracked up laughing) have i mentioned just how wonderful of a writer you are? the storyline still amazes me to no extent and your writing only makes it better. its obvious you know the characters like the back of your hand. please dont be like me and update soon... i'm horrible at updating my stuff soon :P