summed up in one word: awesome

Yep. Great.

This story is so tragic, you have a great vision of the characters' actions.

I like Rue and Mytho!!

^^ Hehe!

Eerily beautiful. I loved it, even though I detest Rue with a passion. Your writing style is superb, and Rue's voice comes out very strongly in this piece. Great job!

Brilliantly written. It probably didn't achieve the supremely-tragic level you were (probably) trying to create, but 'twas sad, nonetheless. Yes, I'm a sadist (People would say I'm trying to get into the Guiness book of World Records if they were to know how really sadistic I can be -- wait, I'm kidding) but a little elobaration, particularly in Fakir's death, would've been more effective.

Techinically, grammar, spelling wise, it's quite perfect.

A good read overall -- hoping to read more of your Princess Tutu stuff.

Take care, and keep writing!

I really liked this story...I think I've read it a couple times already [but I didn't review because I was too lazy to log in he ^^;...:(] Anyway...it was well written and I haven't seen it done before so...-fa~aves-