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| Chromde 2008-08-31 ch 1, | abuseVery sweet. |
| bookworm2009 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abusei love it |
| angry penguin 2007-12-17 ch 1, | abuseToo cute. |
| DeanParker 2006-10-19 ch 1, | abuseLove it! Nancy and Frank are soo good together! |
| Call Me Sarah 2006-06-26 ch 1, | abuseReally good, and sweet! |
| StoriesThatNeverWere 2006-05-02 ch 1, | abuseCute! |
| PrincessSkywalkerOrgana 2006-05-01 ch 1, | abuseAw. Very cute. Frank leaned his head over so his lips were next to Nancy’s ear. “You know, I’m really glad we waited the…five years…that we did before we started dating.” Nancy smiled a little more at the hot breath on her neck and glanced over. “Why’s that?” “Because otherwise, getting married a week after we started dating, would seem pretty crazy.” He turned, putting his other arm around her, pulling her into a kiss. |
| lightwarai 2006-04-05 ch 1, | abuseWOW! Suspense! And lots of it! This was really great... I could almost forgive you for taking so long with Human (but then.. I'm not one to talk!) I really enjoyed Joe & Nancy's interaction, plus the who "finally getting married" part! This was great! |
| 4everndfh 2006-04-04 ch 1, | abuseLoved it... very cute & funny. I liked what frank had to say at the end. Just one question... how come joe walked her down the isle & not carson? either way, it was great |
| katie janeway 2006-04-04 ch 1, | abuse*Laughs* I loved it! Though Frank's last line still has me cracking up...yes, I would definitely say the wait was a good thing... |
| Danni 2006-04-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseCute, but I have a feeling you haven't been to very many weddings. Carson, as father of the bride, should be the one walking Nancy down the aisle. And, I'm really surprised you didn't have Joe being Frank's Best Man. The Best Man stands by the groom as the bride arrives. Other than that, it was cute. |
| serindraxx 2006-04-04 ch 1, | abusehmm, very interesting, you should keep writing. |
| Rustred 2006-04-04 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. |