one thing that I like in this fic is how making out is pictured quite arousing yet doesn't felt like some cheesy-porn.
The fic is short but sounded believable.
Nice one.

Oh my God! Such detail...but I loved it!

Aw! This was so sweet!
I loved it, thanks for sharing it!
Akane and hitonari are great together! *_*
I especially loved how the story was short and sweet, but at the same time so realistic!! Great job, really.

That was a great read! The boys are so hot for each other!

That was so cool! ^_^ Those two are so cute and sexy together. And I love how Tachibana is embarrassed and Hiiragi is not and makes fun of Tachibana because he doesn't want him to leave.

X3 oh my... absolutely love, love, loved this...

wa! I loved embaressed Akane! xD And this fic was so cute~~!

Upon rereading - that ending is so cute. X3 This is where, if I were five years younger, you would see the word "kawaii" pulled out and used in something very unlike moderation.

...Of course, we still don't know what color Hitonari's hair is down there.

"Because yeah, he might be embarrassed, but he wasn't about to admit that to the guy that was still his rival, and if Hiiragi could be cool about this then he could too."

This line really struck me, and I'm not really sure why. It's as in-character as all the rest of the piece, but the word "cool" just kind of thwacked me around the head. Maybe it's just because I avoid slang so much in writing.

But, you know I love your characterization, and seeing anything I'll from you is a treat. Keep it up!