I love that song, this story was just so perfect. It was written so perfectly that I am speechless. Great job I really enjoy this story.

I have enjoyed all your stories and look forward to the final chapters in Gone but not forgotten. I stayed up super late just to finish all your stories.

I thought is was good but it was so sad. At least in the end, Olivia kissed Elliot. I think you should write more one shots.

Good! I LOVE Kelly Clarkson,a nd the sing fits my life pretty well. This is such a great story. You are such a great writer! Keep up the good work, and I can't wiat for you to update "He was Gone, But not Forgotten" It is a good story. Well I think that just about covers everything...yep all done here. Again...AWSOME JOB!

ABSOLUTLY AMAZING... Your best yet (and the best on here IMO)! I can't compliment you enough on your angst/romance stories. The way Elliot came back just as she was about to go after him was a perfect touch. And the part where they're crying on the floor together had me crying with them. AMAZING! Keep Writing! Kate

I thought it was really good and very well written _

DAWDLING on a past that could not be remade

here you meant Dwelling

i really liked this. normally i don't like oneshots or songfics but this one is good

You know I love absolutely everything that you write. You have to write me back soon because we have to talk about "Fault" that was such an amazing episode. I knew that if that sniper hadn't gotten him, she would have dropped her gun and they would both be dead.

They are so in love and I love having the proof to rub in everyone's faces lol.

-Kelly

PS Sorry I haven't reviewed your other story yet but I was saving that chapter for when "Fault" ended and now that it has, I have so much reading to catch up on. I promise you'll see another review from me very soon.

I think the format was effective. It's nearly impossible to have the format you want on fanfiction, but having the lyrics in the center made an impact.

hey hey! why wasnt I in this? j/k i could have played a part! really i could! right before she kisses him i can pass by randomly and grab his ass (can you blame me? its Meloni ass lol) and she can be like 'leave my partenr alone' and then wrap her arms around his neck and kiss him and i can be like 'your hot can i grab your ass?' (can you blame me? Its Hargitay ass)LOL yea i understand why im not in there :)

Anyway...great story! very cute!

I love this songfic! When I first heard Because of You, I immediatly thought of Olivia. Now whenever I hear it, I think of her! This is the 2nd songifc I've read with this song, actually. I was going to write one, but I'm bad with EO.

wow that was so good. such raw emotion! i loved it! great writing!

onetreefan

Wow...I loved it. It was really deep and in a way kinda sad. I don't think I've ever heard this song...now I have to go buy it on itunes! OMG 43 minutes...oh man this is gonna be big.