hey when i put the person who is doing you story no way out url in the adress box it said the the person did not exist. i hate to be trouble but if you could send me the url it would be great. i really liked the story line and i cant wait to see what happens eventually and how the other person changed it. thanks a lot.

Yay good luck Reiycheru! Bye Arktos! ^_^

WHAT?! You're not writing more?! >sigh< Oh well, good luck on finding someone to adopt your story. I would offer to adopt it, but currently I'm not signed up for fanfiction, and I'm also fighting writers' block (not very sucsessfuly either). Hope you find the right person!
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huh, couple weeks in the spirit world and already five years have gone by in this one...

poor Kohaku was stuck either way... poor guy

Whoa, time is running out? Time for what? and Kashikoi wants humans to live in the spirit world or I mean both worlds to be reunited? Thsi si so strange adn what is no face doing here? I wonder how much time has passed in Chihiro's world?

You've taken your time with the introduction of the story which is really good and you've definitly taken care into all the details of the plot itself which has now risen a bit more. Great style adn great job in maintaining good story elements!

I hope Kamachi (sp?) pops up soon! If I spelled his name wrong I'm talking about the boiler man.

Great stories and now that I've read your stories on this profile I can put you on Author Alert! Congrats!

Oh she's a plot device that's ok, I was thinking she was going to kill Haku too! So Kashikoi is just going to torture Haku some more isn't she? I feel so sorry for him now.

Poor Rin, hope everything flies more smoothly in chapter 5!

Aw... that was sweet of Rin! I've only read about 3 Spirited Away fanfictions and I didn't like them because they were all OOC, but this is pretty good and it's good that you're critizing your self to make it even better.

I wonder why only 7 years have passed with Chihiro? Whoa, if she's older now then how can Haku and her have relationship (is awfully distrubed) and did she almost forget the spirit world?

It would make sense after all if you go through something like that then your human mind does try to block it out and make it seem like a dream. You have a good depth of the human mind I think.

I like what you did with Rin, she does need her say and I think after all they've been through wiht Chihiro she would say something like that!

To chapter 4!

Hm, you have a point, Haku is a bit different but then again he did just get burned by Yubaba and he does have to wear pink now and he does have a lot of cleaning to do. Wow, you like toturing anime characters just like me!

Rin is taking everything breezily which is kind of funny too, you'd think she'd be a bit more panicky, that should add to Haku's distress. She also brought up a good point, what is Haku going to do in the human world? Hm...

To chapter 3!

Wow, that was awfully smart of Yubaba to do that, though it was technically not playing fair not tricking so they're both right in a way. Yubaba should play more fair and Haku should try thinking things throug, but hey that's why we all like them!

Oh in case you're wondering, I'm just reviewing for chapter 1, I've been meaning to review this story for a while becasue I love 'Spirited Away'.

It's looking good so far, nice beginning too, very smooth, I can't wait to see how Chihiro will come into play for this. Well, I better get to chapter 2!

Meh, its nice. Not as good as stranger than fiction, tho!

It looks like you're setting up for quite the epic - I am intrigued. Good going!

Also, I know it sounds like they're saying 'No Face' in the English dub, but what they're really saying is 'Noh Face'. Noh, as you may or may not know, is a type of Japanese play, and is also the type of mask that particular character uses as a face, hence the name. It's a small nit-pick, but it really ought to be spelled correctly. ;)

Anyway, I'm looking forward to finding out how you continue on with this suddenly very complex-looking plot! :)

Hey! Sorry I've been away for so long - life's been pretty busy lately. Anyway, I'm back and catching up, and I just wanted to say, 'good chapter!' I spotted a misspelled 'customer' as 'costumer' twice near the beginning, but other than that, nothing leapt out at me. Onward to chapter 5! :)

Puta little more Chihiro in the story but other wise it's
pretty good.

Say-tha-what? serve a purpose?... Anyway very good, SHORT, chapter.