Reviews for Living with Strangers

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asm613 2008-07-01 ch 1,	abuseGo Naruto! Make Sasuke see what he needs. And of course_Naruto wins_but when Naruto wins, Sasuke also wins in the long run-he just doesn't like to admit it. This was another hilarious yet sensitive story.
Thekk 2007-09-09 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful work. Everyone was in character, there was yaoi, and Kakashi is sentenced to living with the happiest couple in Ninjaland. Keep up the great writing!
Cylent Dragon 2007-08-24 ch 1,	abuseAgain, genius. Particularly when naruto almost tries to explain his and sasuke's relationship to Kakashi. That deep breath was so perfectly described. Had me laughing out loud for a good minute.
Ashen Phoenix 2007-08-24 ch 1,	abusePure, hilarious, gold. XD I loved the interplay between them all. And Kakashi's little "mood improvement" at the very end: brilliant.
Kinkatia 2007-08-08 ch 1,	abuseHilarious. Absolutely hilarious.
copygeijutsuka 2007-02-07 ch 1,	abuseI liked it!! although, to be honest, i don't really get it.. ^_^" maybe reading the first part thing would help it make more sense? lol.
Nanaki Lioness 2006-12-02 ch 1,	abuseI adore this! I just read the prequel to it, and I adore that too. You have a way with words... ^^
moocow33 2006-10-27 ch 1,	abusewhoa i loved this fic ^^ particularly the ending and this part "After the fourth day of failing to remove him from their domicile, Naruto had managed to infect their house like a particularly loud, orange fungus." hehe ^^ go narusasu
crimson nightmare 2006-08-18 ch 1,	abuseI die laughing every time I read "Avoiding the Issue", and now there's a sequel! Just as potent! Favourites, I tell you, favourites indeed. Wonderful job, thanks for sharing :3
yue no rei 2006-08-01 ch 1,	abuse-laughs- I can imagine that Kakashi's home life would be hell with Naruto and Sasuke under one roof
Glutvy 2006-06-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseI read your two Naruto fics, Living with Strangers and Avoiding the Issue. Very well done! I did like how you kept them in character and threw Kakashi in there. He's one of my favorite characters ^^. You were able to use detail in just the right way, and the word flow was great. However, there were some grammar and spelling mistakes in both stories. You should read through your stories more before you post, and get a beta reader to give you their opinion on it too. Try doing a Google search for 'beta readers' or 'Naruto beta readers'. You're bound to find someone. Keep up the good work! Your writing is something I can read when feeling PMSy and make me feel tons better. Sincerely, Glutvy
SimplyTurquoise 2006-06-22 ch 1,	abuseThis cracked me up - especially the last few lines!!
Glitterfuck 2006-06-22 ch 1,	abusevery very nice! i like it! it's a bit funny and confusing. but when i read it for the second time... wow!
Vampire Louis 2006-06-08 ch 1,	abuseI've been reading through a great deal of your work and I decided that it was fair time I write you a review or two. As a starter, in my very personal opinion, I find that you are certainty one of the better authors out there. The majority of your stories seem to have a good balance of humor and sobriety, which keeps the reader interested and indulged. Not to mention your ability to scatter amusing memorable one-liners throughout a story is also a major plus. In addition, Your works tend to have a good punch line at the end, leaving you feeling complete -as if you've just got a great joke and it was well worth the read. The characters aren't incredibly far fetched, which is a nice break away from how TOO many authors tend to write them. And the whole of the stories (short and long) tend to feel really balanced in the believability aspect. In conclusion, I have to say... well done! I hope you continue writing because I will certainly be trilled to read more of your work. Especially if it's NaruSasu centric lol. Take care! Sven
Kaliotrimma 2006-06-07 ch 1,	abusedied from laughing so hard about the shower line Oh, that was great. They were all so IC, it was perfect. You should make it a trilogy, with some other funky plot-bunny.

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