 Omgoth 2009-11-19 . chapter 2hana has 3 dogs, the haimaru sankyodai. |
 Eevee uzumaki 2009-11-13 . chapter 21please rite some more |
 AnOn 2009-11-08 . chapter 1 Why is it always the good fics that get abandoned...guess it always comes down to effort |
 Sydonai 2009-08-30 . chapter 21For a few ideas on how to handle Ino's new style, check out the later parts of a series called "Alien Nine". |
 puffdadder 2009-08-02 . chapter 21HOLY SH## what a story! can't wait for your next (hopefully) update. My kinda naruto! PSYCHO! yar! lol anyway good job, grammar, spelling, and content. |
 NARUHAREM FOREVA 2009-07-31 . chapter 17wow... |
 Deh Boom Boom Hair 2009-07-26 . chapter 1aweosme |
 jesi ki kage 2009-07-21 . chapter 21THAT WAS AWESOME!I BEG OF YOU TO PLEASE UPDATE THIS AMAZING STORY!PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! |
 xfighter4 2009-07-16 . chapter 21Good story!
I only have to critic the changing skill level of Naruto, how could he not have defeated Tayuna or at least have fought her to a standstill?
Pls update soon! |
 UglyDucklingForever 2009-07-01 . chapter 21That fight was without a doubt the most badass thing I've ever read naruto do. Seriously.
well. I'm done. |
 Necrovore 2009-06-28 . chapter 21Shame this story is dead, it really is an enjoyable read. I hope you someday write a similar Sakura into a future story as it is a variation I haven't seen before and would enjoy reading more of. |
 tomoyohime8 2009-06-09 . chapter 21at first, the story was kind of weird, but your writing has really improved as it went on. :D
hoping (really really hard), that you update soon. |
 SisterSafetyPin 2009-06-04 . chapter 1I really wanted to read this but the way Rin acts is completely ridiculous. No woman who gave birth one day is running into the battle the very next no matter how much she wants to. It's physically impossible. And even if it wasn't impossible. No mother would leave her day old son in the car of some random person. AND EVEN IF SHE WOULD, She most definitely wouldn't just say, "LOOK OUT FOR THAT BOY!" *shakes head* Just makes no sense |
 kyuubi shadow 2009-05-16 . chapter 21Not bad |
 jordunn moss 2009-05-01 . chapter 21 dude you need to update do it soon or (insert demonic voice) I will devour your soul mwaahahahahaahhahahahahahahahahahahaah |