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JOOGI
2009-12-12 . chapter 9
UPDATE PLEASE I HAVE BEEN WAITING YEARS
Kitiara Woodbane
2009-10-09 . chapter 9
Please update this! I have NEVER read a fanfiction so fervently gripping. you are gifted! Please update AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!
shuriko
2008-08-07 . chapter 9
W...T...F. That was fucking CRAZY! More Chapters! Now dammit all to the bowels of hell!
Heather Martell
2008-07-07 . chapter 9
I read the other stories with Sealink and her mate, Damon and loved them. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Sythe
2007-12-20 . chapter 9
This is so very out of character. At first it was kinda interesting to see where you would take the story and how you would develop the character Sealink. But to this chapter...very shallow indeed. Because I can't imagine a human that can fit as an alien queen having such...overly dramatic moments...and the king...Maybe you should do some more indepth character building rather than just flaunt them around. There's a distinct difference in the mindset of aliens and human no matter how 'humanized' they are. Right about now all I can see from your aliens are more like human in an alien body
Stormrunner56
2007-11-15 . chapter 1
This story is definitely excellent. :)
I have noticed one small problem though...
WHY AREN'T THERE MORE CHAPTERS?! :)

Please finish it...
Thanks!
persephone77
2007-09-18 . chapter 1
I really like your stories :). But i have a silly question (I'm just curious.) Is there a sexual relationship between Damon and Sealink, too ?
persephone77
2007-09-18 . chapter 9
I have a weird question, but I´m curious. What is the relationship between Sealink and Damon like? I mean, they are mates. But is it a sexual relationship?
Stormrunner56
2007-09-15 . chapter 1
OK, this is a damn good fanfic. I have but one, simple, humble, request... FINISH IT!
Thank you.
CLAUDIUSM
2007-08-27 . chapter 9
Hi, i just finished reading the story, and i have to say that i oove it, the idee of a human queen is great, i have read the other two storyes, and they are great to, hope you will update soon, bye.
GuesssWho
2007-05-17 . chapter 9
Continue!
wolf guardian of light
2007-05-05 . chapter 9
Oh yes... I've been waiting for this...

It's been around, what 6, maybe 7 months, since I last saw this fic. Bavk then, I didn't even have an account.

But, boy was the wait sure worth it! I had a feeling that it would be... Whatever his name is. And I wonder, How will the Pedator culture handle a VERY pissed off Sealink?

Something tells me that it will most certainly worth reading.

Please, tell me what you think of my first two fics. They suck, don't they..?
StormRaven333
2007-04-19 . chapter 9
OMG! That was bloody awesome!
Please, please...PLEASE UPDATE
...ASAP...-nods frantically-
~Storm
muwamtha
2007-04-18 . chapter 9
Once again, well done! Your style is refreshing.
zizarlover
2007-04-17 . chapter 9
this has got to be the among best written-stories on AVP EVER! i luv it so cool!
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