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JennCorinthos 2007-05-29 ch 1,	abuseLoved it... And that scene with Flack and Stella so realistc... Great short... JENNIFER
Just Sab 2006-11-13 ch 1,	abuseThey got "caught" by Stella and Flack heh! Of course Mac's gonna find out Linds. I'm glad she agreed to go on the dinner she'd promised. But it's a pity Danny didn't get to carry out his experiment. ;) “From here on in Montana, I pay. I’m Italian, you could be killed in my family for letting a girl pay for dinner.” -> Haha so true! :-D I enjoyed this story. Funny, sweet and romantic. Oh, and he called her Lindsay. ^^
DLalltheway! 2006-10-18 ch 1, anon.	abuseOMG! AMAZING! MWAH! FABULOUS!
Moriel21 2006-10-13 ch 1,	abuseWow! That was...wow! Seriously I LOVED this one...that was SO good! Classic Danny and Lindsay right there, this story was them to a t...It was like watching it happen in my head again, you really are brilliant! Lol! I have way too many favorite lines and parts from this one...I'd just repost the whole thing back in here as my favorite line, so I'll try to choose 3 ...LOVED that Stella and Flack over heard the phone sex experiment talk, that was way too cute! This line totally jumped out at me and I just loved it, it summed Lindsay so well for me somehow...: "It scared her to realize that Danny, and car horns and non stop night life was fast replacing the quite, calm, freedom of Montana as her home." And of course this literally made me snort with laughter! “This is almost worth having phone sex with you,” And then this was just so sweet and perfect! She made him laugh and on its own accord his hand shot out and twirled a piece of dark hair; he’d been wanted to do that all day. “From here on in Montana, I pay. I’m Italian, you could be killed in my family for letting a girl pay for dinner.” His voice was low, her attention focused on his hand in her hair and she nodded. I love how well you write these two, you've got them down and it's fabulous! Well done:)
DistractedlyHere 2006-09-25 ch 1,	abuseAll I can say is Wow. Well done. You are amazing.
christina jean 2006-08-13 ch 1,	abuseWell, I am a little late reading this but I loved it. Adored the bantering about the phone sex and especially the reactions of Flack and Stella. Great job.
wjobsessed 2006-05-09 ch 1,	abuseI really enjoyed this. Thanks for the DL fix.
wolfmyjic 2006-04-18 ch 1,	abuseGreat story!
jcchic 2006-04-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis was good, I love D/L pairing and them being caught in the phone sex convo hilarious
achingankle 2006-04-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseThat was the story I`ve been looking everywhere for after those two episodes. THank you! You did a nice job
chili-peppers 2006-04-05 ch 1,	abusethats was great!! loved it well done!!i hope you write more!!
NeverMindDream 2006-04-05 ch 1,	abuseOh damn the way you write those things always makes my toes curl...yikes! So good...the fighting over the bill was hilarious...but being caught talking about phone sex at the lab...AHAHA...loved it! Welcome back to fic writing!! Boom!!
oddie33325 2006-04-05 ch 1,	abuseGOD I LOVE THEM TOGETHER! TELL ME THIS ISNT A ONE SHOT BECAUSE I WANT SOME MORE!
Dingbat142001 2006-04-05 ch 1,	abuseOh WOW! This is fantastic! Gotta say, I love the whole kissing part ;) Oh and having that conversation in the locker room with F and S there, hilarious! Fav line: "Lindsay turned her face into his chest unconsciously, trying to hide her face as she moaned." Are you going to have more chapters? Pleaase do! It's too good to just leave there!
Dybdahl 2006-04-05 ch 1,	abuseDanny is a real charmer...

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