Reviews for The Slumbering Princess

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Barranca 2007-07-17 ch 18,	abuseThis was an enchanting story, a fairy tale in a fairy tale. One must feel sorry for Anakin as greatness is thrust upon his shoulders but he will always have his mother's love. A wonderful study of Shmi's character, you have shown us how much she has given to her son, and with no regrets thereby.
lateBloomer04 2007-05-02 ch 18,	abuseWOW, this story was AMAZING! I especially loved the parallels at the end between the 'Sleeping Beauty' ending about the twins, and Luke freeing Anakin from the power of the Dark Side. Well done. You fused the 'conception by midi-chlorians' with a romance with interesting results. You should write more mulit-layered stories like this. Bravo, it's going on my favs!
Someone 2006-12-15 ch 18, anon.	abusethat really was beautiful excuse the abruptness but I've actually never reviewed before but i felt your story deserved some recognition even if its only from me Thanks for bothering to express your creativity honestly Me
DelilahDeanSkywalker 2006-11-29 ch 18,	abuseThis was absolutely MINDBLOWING. The way you wrote it was AMAZING. PLEASE KEEP WRITING!
QueenMeep 2006-09-30 ch 18,	abuseWow, what an ending... That actually gives an explanation as to why Shmi had a look on her face like she knew something more than she was letting on, when talking to Qui-Gon in Ep I. I love the way this was packaged in a fairy tale story... reminds me of the use of fairy tales. Bravo! This definitely goes down in my list of favorites. Don't read too many good stories with the sith'ari prophecy. Encore. ;)
goofy_caffinated_guru 2006-09-28 ch 18, anon.	abuseAwesome conclusion to the story! I loved how your story had a curse placed an Anakin and then had him given an equal amount of light so that he could have a choice between the darkness and light. This so incredibly good I demand you to write more stories. Strong in the Force this young writer is. ^_^
a b 2006-09-28 ch 18, anon.	abusewhoa. COOL! Great Story.
dragoneyes171986 2006-09-28 ch 18,	abusewow, that was great!
x Rajah x 2006-09-28 ch 18,	abuseI liked this. Great job!
x Rajah x 2006-09-26 ch 17,	abuseOh. Creepy.
goofy_caffinated_guru 2006-09-17 ch 17, anon.	abuseWow the ending of this chapter freaked me out! I never heard of the term "Sith'ari" and I don't know where you got Palpy's apprentice 'cause I thought the Zabrak was Palpy's first and I never heard that Palpy had children so I am confused. I thought Ani's birth was a result of the Midi-chlorians by themselves not by the Sith's help. I know this is an AU but I don't know how much of this last stuff is true. It would be greatly appreciated if you left a little notice of clarification on the heading of the next chapter. -Thanks ^_^
QueenMeep 2006-09-16 ch 17,	abuseOh. Wow. I'm speechless. You've worked this in SO well. It makes perfect sense that Shmi would know about the prophecy, so that the "miracle" that happened would make a little more sense to her. Well done. I haven't read many referring to the Sith'ari on Very intriguing indeed. Everything you've done to this point makes perfect sense, now.
dragoneyes171986 2006-09-16 ch 17,	abusethings are looking up. very interesting turn, wonderful explanation.
QueenMeep 2006-09-08 ch 16,	abuseVery interesting twist, I had no idea that Shmi would have a miscarriage with her child from Kern. So Anakin really doesn't have a father... And after all she's been through... Goodness, poor Shmi.
goofy_caffinated_guru 2006-09-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseI am totally blown away...I knew Darna was not to be trusted. I don't think anyone could possible have come up with a better way to have ended this chapter. Is this next chapter going to put Shmi back in her present life with Ani? If the end of this is soon I demand a sequel.

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