Aw... So cute! well really the greatest storyy ever told :D
Awesome, I love it
Angélique

aw I loved it so great story

*death glare* you always change my mind on these couples things!! Now you have made me like HHr! Garg... love da fic

wonderful; just as i expected

I think your story was pretty cool and well-written. I thought that the end was just a bit lacking, but don't mind me, it's just my opinion, the important thing is that YOU are satisfied with it. I'd also like to add that I agree with you 100% on what you wrote at the end. I really hate it when authors give Hermione a whole new look and make Harry notice her just because of that. I think Harry should notice her just for being the bossy bookworm we've all come to adore, hehe. All in all, I realli liked your story, hope you keep writing more.

Aw! That was so sweet! I loved it! Good job!

This is a cute story. Please make some more. Harry and Hermione forever.

A nice little story. Nice descriptions & dialog. I agree with you on not really liking stories where they only notice each other's bodies.

Now go write something long, were they slowly fall in love...
-Korval