BRILLIANT!Excellent only the persons in charge of the show had allowed something like this to happen for e/o!You did a great depiction of expressing the dynamics between the two realistic scenario!BRAVO!While I was reading this story,the song IN MY VEINS by Andrew Belle was playing on the radio,and I thought that this is a perfect song for our favorite detectives,it fits!They also have a video by maureen acheampong on you tube with this same song!She did a magnificent job making title of the video is,SVU Elliot& Olivia -In My your story,great and Stabler Foreverrrrr!

excellent story

really nice story. I loved the way the song goes with the chapter. It was really Olivia when she said 'Shut up and kiss me'

really good story!

-:Sabri:-

Nothing like sweet, sweet, but well executed, EO! I love it. Hooray for you!

That was good...nice work :)

THAT IS CLASSIC!MORE PLEASE!

That a great chapter!

Awesome! Love it!

Awe!

oh! that was so cute! i loved it!

Yay. Good ending. I liked that.

Eo!

onetreefan

oh wow i hope u posts more soon i really likedz this o1! u r a GR8 Writter!

now wut!

I liked it. I love fatherly, tough love cragen.

"He was still beating himself up over his words in the hospital. 'I’m taken.'"

Just so you know, he didn't say "I'm taken", he said "I couldn't take it." Referring to losing Olivia or the job since they are the only things he has left. Just an FYI :)