Wow... this is good! Please don't give me a long wait as you did your other readers! I want to know what happens next! I like the way you portrayed Miaka, I normally hate her. She's a total idiot!

it's really good i hope you finish this story soon i can't wait to read it's ending.

Padi men! ang galing nito ah! but it still wont change the fact that i hate fushigi yuugi. but is so cool! dude you have beateb me. you are the man! i mean woman!

^^ Hey! So, are you gonna update this thing or not? I'm dyin' of anticipation here!

You have to update!! I need to know what happens next!! I'm loving this!! Update ASAP!!=]

Leah/balcklace-and-roses

nice story!

its great! like it!

Oh. My. GOD!

I LOVE YOU!

Thank you so so SOO much for updating this thing! D'you know how agonizing it is for me when I wait for something? And it's not good for my health! I think I've got obsessive-compulsive disorder! So, whenever you write a chapter for your FY fics, remember me and the serious repercussions that may be brought upon my health upon turning anxious with waiting for the update of one of my favorite fics. ^_^

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Now, on to the story itself. Miaka's precarious position on the verge of love is okay--after all, she's been stalking Tamahome for more than a week (or two years... XD)--but even at that rate, she seems a little too into him, if you know what I mean.

My absolute favorite part of this story, which I'm sure others love as well, is the balcony scene. I found it cute and really sweet. I really loved the comparison with Romeo and Juliet, it was a genius piece of comedy. ;) But I think it would've been great if Miaka caught Tamahome... well, undressing. Either I find it aesthetically pleasing, or it's just another one of my fangirl urges.

Okay, construction. I love the lyrical cuts, but there are some punctuation problems and at least one misspelled word in there ("hysterically"), but with an amazing plot and a great writing style, I can overlook those. *wink*

On the whole, this chapter is really witty, addictive, and simply stellar. Please continue writing, and more power! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter! Lots of love to ya!

~Suzaku Spicegirl/ MiraShio

I want more! Don't leave us other 2 and half years withour chapters!

I love your "Mature" Miaka, it's awesome this fic.

Very well wrotten! I'm quick to see chapter 2, it's fantastic!

No worry everybody ^^ she will update^^ i will make sure of that¬¬ (evil)

Bueno al fin actualizaste(Viva el Spansglish xD!) Ains MIaka esta como yo xD que no se puede sacar a Tama de la cabeza xD y parece ser que Tama va por el mismo camino^^
Asi Yui mató a la familia de Tama T_T LA ODIO psico, joder! y a Nakago también¬¬
Parece ser que a Miaka no le salió también la jugada xD a ver cual será la reacción de Tama xD

Thank you for continuing you story. i'm really happy about it.

Hey! ^_^ As you can see, I signed with the name "Suzaku Spicegirl", but I DO have an account here under "MiraShio". I'm just using a different name so I can write lots of reviews and pull you out from oblivion so you can start writing again.

I LOVE IT! I love Miaka's character, and how you didn't portray her as stupid. She's different, and yet nothing I love separately from the original Miaka. And I also love how deadly Tamahome is as well. ^_^ Doesn't stop me from planning to stalk him! It's going in my favorites (as soon as I log in... AND AS SOON AS YOU UPDATE! Please? Thankies.)

~Suzaku Spicegirl/MiraShio

wow^^ this is going better and better^^