(paste thumbs up here) nice work. i really liked it. aww mamo is soo godamned sweet lol. and sexy (for a cartoon anime kinda guy)

You always manage to pull me back into SM.

Wow. Now I miss SM fanfiction, just for works like this...

Beautiful imagery and descriptive emotional appeal (am I sounding smart?). Your work always leaves me breathless and ashamed of my own. xD But, on the other hand, you're an inspiration. :D

Sorry you always have to tell me...I should still keep track of your work, even though I never visit any SM fanfiction anymore. I should. I'm sorry. *bows* I bow to both you and Nimbirosa. ^^

-Kara

wow, so painful it leaves me breathless

*echos review from Caramel Apple* Though I read this one slower, so I didn't have to re-read sentences. I'm a bad one for just skimming over words and not processing the full meaning, and this story is full of meaning; you know what I mean? ^^

Great job, both of you.