oh i love Akito/Tohru stories
please please keep going, i want to knew what happens next!

This is a great story! I really hope that Akito and Tohru get together. I love how you write!

I can't see how anybody could hate Tohru. ...Be annoyed, yes but not actually hate. But I can't change your opinion.

Well, there was a lil Akito/Tohru in there. That's something. And yeah, I can see Shigure being perverted around Akito here and there. *snickers*

Akito is pure evilness in this fic toward Tohru. Not even a smidge of fondness. Angst is good though. I just hope eventually he tolerates her instead of flat out hate her. Ah...there I go with my Akiru fangirling. Sorry I bet you're not keen on that.
Anyhow, you updating anytime soon?? This is a great story.

is this becoming a yoai fic (akito/shigure)? if it is then i am sorry, then i will have to stop reading this, since i dont like yaoi or yuri. but update soon!

Holy crap is this fic hot! Personally, I find the whole Akito/Tohru relationship (if you can call it that) to be very much a turn-on; the hints of what's to come are extremely titillating. I'm really enjoying this look at the "dark-side" to this pairing...this is exactly how I think their relationship should be written, if it's going to be romantic. I think it's impossible to overlook the sadistic side of Akito, and I'm really enjoying the way he's toying with Tohru - who is helpless to resist. Keep it up; I can't wait to read more! XD

:O umm... thats weird...BUT IN FREEAKING KEEWL WAY okay im done

Lovely.

i definately think the idea is great and you pulled it off well^^
are you going to make akito eventually fall for tohru
or just have him tease her? i must know
you can kind of tell you dont like tohru from reading it though
i dont know if you meant to do that or not
maybe i just dont like the fact that you dont like her idk ha^^
oh well great job. hope all of this helped

anyway keep up the good work^

oi update this story!
i love the one sided with a bit of something from Aki!!
kinda feel the same about torhu...but it will be awesome if tohru cracked on accident and let out her anger with out any apologies!
lol just an idea...
update plz!

obnoxious words from
-kyane black

YAY AKIGURE!

I really really think this story is scalding hot. I wanna know what's going to happen. Akito is amazing here, its all just impressive and I really look forward to reading the next part! MORE PLEASE hehehehe :D loved it so far!

Oh.
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Keep up the excellent work!
sexy-jess.

O Please Keep Going! The hint of HanaxAkito was excellent in the other chapter too. pwease keep updating!

Darling you kick ass.
This will have to be a relatively short review, as the battery on my laptop is about to go out and I am much, much too lazy to walk three feet to the outlet and plug it in. But I'll do what I can!
Anyways. This was a great chapter, especially considering you were having such trouble with it. There were SOME issues, like the fact that you kept calling them 'teens.' That's a pet peeve of mine, I associate it with very amatuer writers...I was suprised to see it coming from you! But it's okay. It was just about the only thing wrong with this fic, most of it was awesome.
I especially liked the Akito/Tohru bit. You write her well despite not liking her, and the way you wrote Akito was just GREAT. Very in character. Extremely. Um...I have more to say so I'm going to go plug the damn computer in. Yeah. You manage, unlike me, to write Akito as he actually is in the series. Manipulative and conniving and hot. Haha. The image of him naked in the water is burned into my brain now, thank you very much for that. I was a little confused as to how he fell asleep in there and didn't drown, but okay.
Thank you for plugging my stories, and I'm glad I was helpful to you! Yay for that! I wish you lots of luck in continuing to write this and your other thing. You can do it! Go you! *Goes back to high school and steals a cheerleading uniform, puts it on, and does some kind of lame cheer that involves taping things to raccoons*

Amazing imagery of the roten. I could picture the entire scene flawlessly in my mind. Awesome work!