I know this is suppose to be about Jack but it reminds me of Davy Jones and Tia Dalma!

I do like this, you have a true talent for poetry that I shall never have.

But for the love of god, fix the story description. You misspelled "regret" and I only clicked to see how bad the story was.

Thankfully, I was pleasantly surprised by the quality of your writing.

suprisingly touching

omg! you put it up! i started reading it and knew id read it before, so i looked back through my recived files and there it was! This is by far my fav of your poemysongs! :-) rock on! :-);-)

Suzy x