 cass-sams12 2009-12-07 . chapter 55I enjoy this story greatly. Thanks for the update! |
 bob_fish 2009-12-07 . chapter 55 Oh my goodness, wedding preparations and in-laws in the house at the same time *twitches at the memory of last Christmas*
Mrs Meade is very convincingly awful, especially in the way she comes out with super-blunt critical things that leave everyone going "did she really just say that?" Family will do that. No wonder Jean and Sciezka are on the wine ...
Loved the detail of Sciezka having three billion pencils stuck in her hair, too. |
 Hughes-san 2009-12-03 . chapter 54I was waiting until I had read the entire 54 chapters of this story because I was so caught up in it. I had so much trouble trying to pull myself away from it and I know how hard it can be to write 54 chapters with the chapters being so damn lengthy. This is a good thing.
I feel like it's probably unfinished right now and I would love it if you would finish it. I don't see any sort of required editing that I can recall, but I love how you planned out each individual step before the next. It looks like you did research on being paralyzed, stitches, and any other required conditions and most people don't do such efforts, so to see it, it's nice (My fics are rather old so they don't show that I do it as well).
I really do hope you finish this soon! |
 cass-sams12 2009-11-13 . chapter 54I love this story! It is written very well, with great attention to detail. Realistic too. I always have wondered what Havoc did after he was hospitalized, and this story is an excellent way to ease my curiosity. Thanks for sharing! |
 PossiblyInsane213 2009-10-27 . chapter 15I'm reveiw 200! This is so romantic. I love it! |
 PLOT BUNNIES INC. 2009-05-05 . chapter 54More? Please?! By the way...love that Al had a lot of parts in this chapter...he's one of my favorite characters...Scieska has to be the most awesome girlfriend on the face of the planet...and Havoc has to be the most patient person in the world to put up with Mustang like that(or Ed for that matter lol). Anyway, great chapter! PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER SOON! |
 luffyluffy 2009-04-24 . chapter 54 You know, I remember you asking with the poll feature, "How should I end the story?"
To be honest, if you wanted to end here, It'd be a great ending. Not saying that you SHOULD, just saying you can |
 fiercefiction 2009-03-21 . chapter 53Moar! Moar!
Ps.. Plz to be adding more RusselxEd storyline, m'kay? Haha. Ilu! |
 PLOT BUNNIES INC. 2009-03-02 . chapter 53AH! YEAH! I want more chapters! |
 Angibugg 2009-02-07 . chapter 53I don't think I can tell you how amazing this story is. If I could I'd make everyone I know read it even if they don't understand it. :P I love it when the guys get together.
Feury left with Tiny to save Breda from the white fluff ball of ferociousness’ pointy teeth and evil plans.
That has to be one of the best lines ever. |
 luffyluffy 2009-02-07 . chapter 53What, so no more Goate-Chan? Your almost as bad as Arakawa herself, with the killing off of my favorite(ilu maes)
But yeah, Random rash much? But good that Jean is back(I squeed when I saw that there was a new chapter, and my boyfriend got scared and thought I was having a spaz attack XD)
Also, I'm awaiting a spin off oneshot, where Ed is playing with Tiny, but doesnt know his name is Tiny, so Havoc keeps calling for Tiny and Ed keeps getting mad... *cough*hint*cough*
;D |
 Annette 2009-02-01 . chapter 52 I have read the whole of this WIP story over the last two days. Thank you so much for keeping me so hooked that I had to read. Please keep up the good work. I will be looking forward to more. |
 PLOT BUNNIES INC. 2009-01-30 . chapter 52YEAH! ANOTHER CHAPTER! My favorite part had to be "I better not need one or Jacqueline is never getting access to confidential briefs again." so great! WRITE MORE! |
 luffyluffy 2009-01-26 . chapter 52;_;
Poor Havoc *hugs*
Hey, seeing as you reminded me about Roy burning the cuts shut, shouldnt Havoc have a shitload of burns on his stomach? Like, disfigering burns? Like, Turn off burns? Although, I do seem to remember something about Havoc getting skin grafts from someone...Not sure who though. Anyway, Great timing, I had just had a shit-tastic day(Much like Havoc, ironicly) and this managed to light up my day...which is weird, because Havoc is awesome, and reading his shit day made my shit day better...I think I'm sadistic...Ah well, baseless ponderings. Nice work! *high fives* |
 PLOT BUNNIES INC. 2009-01-22 . chapter 51AH! PLEASE WRITE MORE! GARRG! |