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| irony882 2007-07-10 ch 1,  | abuseI like the way you've written in Sid's perspective. This way, it is an outsider looking in, instead of the people that are directly involved. You also got a good idea of how Booth and Brennan were before they met. Nice job! |
| Stella 2007-06-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseLOVED it! This was short, but moved me! It's true that quality doesn't come with quantity (though I'd love to read some novel-length or longer story of yours *wink*). Anyway just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed reading this, and what an emotionally intense experience it was. Really loved it, thank you!! |
| Habita 2007-06-14 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! Loved it! Thanks for sharing! :-) |
| squinter 2007-02-09 ch 1, | abusewell written. I liked it :) |
| SSidle 2006-04-07 ch 1, | abusei like it, doesn't need improvemant |
| Aemie 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abusehey, this is great. good job, captured very well |
| justawritier 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abusecute. |
| sarramaks 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abuseThis was good! The end was very poignant. Sometimes the understated is much more effective than the gushing which is why this works so well. Thank you! |
| AJeff 2006-04-05 ch 1, | abuseYou have a way with words! Beautifully done! |
| Elizabeth Theresa 2006-04-05 ch 1, | abuseHey, that was really neat! I like the detatched perspective for a change, add something different to this catagory. (Yep, I'm all for the different.) |
| NYPD55Chick 2006-04-05 ch 1, | abuseI like it! Keep going the way you have been, it's a really interesting point of view and you've captured it well! |
| awilystar 2006-04-05 ch 1, | abuseI liked Sid's subtle observation of Booth and Brennan's relationship. An interesting take, it makes a good oneshot or you could possibly continue it with further development. -- Jamie |
| EstreyaStar 2006-04-05 ch 1, | abuseAw, so cute! Love the perspective. Always a fan of BB. |
| Bella-mi-amore 2006-04-05 ch 1, | abusethat was awsome. I love the way you are writting it. |
| Ataea 2006-04-05 ch 1, | abusei love this. a very refreshing, different perspective. Kind of like frozen yogurt. Light on the palate, but still tasty ;) No heavy fluff, but a hint of sugar. heehee. Can you tell i'm hungry? I must ask you to keep writing more, and to write longer =) This length is unacceptable >_ |