 myshadowspirit 2006-06-28 . chapter 22Wow, that was a lot shorter then my wedding. Mine drags on and on and on and I just want to-er!BANG! BANG! BANG! Kiss the stupid bride allready!!
sigh . . .better now. |
 Dancing Turtle 2006-06-27 . chapter 22AH! OMG that was AMAZING! i swear it was so emotional i almost cried! you wrote this so beautifully!! I truly love this story, i rely do! altho i'm kinda sad its finished, im glad you wrote the ending wonderfully, and i am most definetly hoping that you WILL do a sequel, cos if you dont i shall hunt you down...(fact!) lol! anywayz, i cannot wait to read the sequel!
lots of virtual cakes and cookies for you, you little sweetheart for writing such an adorbale fic!
x melayna |
 Time and Fate 2006-06-22 . chapter 21wow this is really good |
 myshadowspirit 2006-06-21 . chapter 21GAMBIT!?!?!?!? (falls off bed) I love Gambit! |
 myshadowspirit 2006-06-21 . chapter 20hahah . . .bow tie. . . I'm not fond of tuxedos. This story really got better as you went on. YAY! |
 myshadowspirit 2006-06-20 . chapter 19hmm, I found some pastence errors, but overall it was pretty good. You could of described the fight sceens more, but I heared that's difficult. I'm dreading when I have to do that. |
 myshadowspirit 2006-06-20 . chapter 18Speaking of the book . . . are you done with that? MUST READ . . . of course now schools out you have NO WAY OF GIVEING IT TO ME! How long has Elizabeth known John? I forgot when this started. |
 myshadowspirit 2006-06-20 . chapter 17Good chapter. MUHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA John traped in a box. What to do to with him first . . . sorry. You know when he says “So? I don’t care anymore. All I care about is getting rid of that cure and you.” it sounds like he want's to get rid of Elizabeth too. |
 myshadowspirit 2006-06-20 . chapter 16Ghost? I'm surprize! That doesn't sound stupid! I bet it's taken though, somewhere in the Marvel world. I'm going to find it! I enjoyed this chapter. John wasn't a butt. |
 myshadowspirit 2006-06-20 . chapter 15Cool. That must of been amuseing to watch. I bet the kids' faces wad all squished up when the ran into the wall . . .he he |
 Dancing Turtle 2006-06-13 . chapter 21am anticipating next chap now...AH i cant wait to see what happens! we should be expecting something exciting yes? or is it reely gonna be a happy ending for them? either way, i cant wait! |
 Dancing Turtle 2006-06-12 . chapter 20AH! i cant believe he asked her to marry him! update, update, update! |
 touchnotthecat 2006-06-06 . chapter 1oh, it is juciy will read more! |
 tweekerd 2006-06-06 . chapter 17 sweet chapter liked it alot. you should make her a bigger part of the movie so that we dont miss anything. |
 tweekerd 2006-06-05 . chapter 16 hey really like were your going in the story keep it up. Im glad you decided to put her into the third movie. |