This is SO CUTE. Totally anticipating the next chapter! XD

I think it's about time you updated this story. I want to know what happens in your version of their first real mission. Please hurry up and post something. :D

great story! update soon!! i love naruto's new personality~~

cool story cant wait till you update

why is the title And a little fish named Bo?
and can Haku and Zabusa plz survive.

Great fic. I'd like to read more of it. No particular complaints, I'd like to see some more of Naruto's "Secret high-ranking" jutsus in the upcoming fights: it's annoying that Sasuke's ALWAYS the one getting first shots on the Demon Brothers...

Very good story! I'm quite enjoying it.

But is it abandoned? It looks like it...

Hope you update soon!

Having Naruto talk like a steriotypical "I don't wanna grow up" loli girl (I know boy characters do it too, but I always associate it with the loli characters because they're the most annoying) is hilarious and a stroke of genius. It's made him into a compleately unique character even though his actions aren't that different. I love it. Good story, looking forward to more. Thanks for writing and sharing.

o! Kakashi's such a clever bunny!
hehehe, hope they're not the only ones to get a shock!
hehehehesoda.

How does Naruto glare at people?

Doesn't he keep his eyes closed all the time?

How does he even see?!

Man, your story is slightly confusing!

Can you answer my above questions when you have time ? ^_^

Thanks!

this is really really good i love it!

i love the way you have naruto talking, what about zabu and hau? are they gonna live or what??


update!

Ahaha. I like the way this is going. And I like Naruto's speech patterns.

*FWEES LOUDLY and dances, before settling in comfortably to wait for an update*

Seriously, the way Naruto refers to everyone including himself in the third person rocks my socks. :D

'bamph' is such a lovely adjective. I am LOVING this story (again; secodn time reading) :D

good keep it up