damn what the FUCK!

IT WAS INCREDBLE!

It actually sounded like the chracters with each and every crazy dialouge they have. It was like seeing the show all over again, through i did like the whole missing eye thing i think it made him more the tragic underclassed hero.

Loved the dialuge the indepth mental struggle nd the ending truely your one of best writers here. I am glad i was able to find your work and this story

interesting

Your now my favortie Buffy/Xander writer ever!

Wow, loved it. Very good.

SO very well done!

Very nice story. I enjoyed the dialogue, and the fact that you took your time telling the story. There was a little problem with using "to" instead of "too" in a couple of places, but that was the only negative. - ml

Oh, good going. I like the whole 'making friendship' idea. It does sound like something Buffy would come up with just to not have to face the facts.

They're all grown up, isn't it sweet?